Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a natural frequency phrase such as “very often” or “almost every time.” Correct the grammar in “on every hour” and “every thirty minute,” and use a clearer structure: frequency, places, and reason. Avoid repeating “advertisements” too many times; use “ads” once the topic is clear.

Ejemplo: Yes, I see advertisements very often when I use my phone or computer. They appear almost every time I watch videos on YouTube or scroll through social media. This is because online platforms rely heavily on advertising to make money.

Sugerencia: Give one specific advertisement instead of several unclear ideas. Use the past tense consistently, for example, “I was attracted to” and “it advertised.” Explain what the advertisement showed and why it impressed you. The phrase “cartoon movies anything cinema” is unclear and should be replaced with a precise description.

Ejemplo: Yes. When I was a child, I remember a television advertisement for a popular cartoon movie. It showed colorful characters wearing fashionable T-shirts, and I was attracted to the bright designs. I wanted to buy one because I was a big fan of the cartoon.

Sugerencia: Use the correct tense and prepositions: say “when I worked there” or “when I work there,” and “on trains and at stations.” Replace the unclear word “liations” with “other forms of public transport.” Organize the answer by stating where you see ads and giving two or three examples.

Ejemplo: Yes, especially in Sydney. When I worked there, I often saw advertisements on trains, buses, and at stations. They promoted clothing, cosmetics, concerts, and local events, so advertising on public transport seemed very common.

Sugerencia: Complete your answer and clearly state your opinion. Correct subject-verb agreement in “advertisements bring” and use plural forms in “customers” and “products.” Explain one or two benefits, such as helping people compare products, and include a linking word such as “because” or “however.” Avoid stopping mid-sentence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I generally like advertisements because they help customers learn about new products and compare different brands. They can also show useful features and special offers. However, I do not like ads that are too repetitive or misleading.

Sugerencia: Use the correct form “I am impressed” and say “healthcare advertisements.” Group the examples logically instead of combining unrelated phrases. Explain why you like this type of advertising, and use natural terms such as “sportswear” and “gym equipment.”

Ejemplo: To be honest, I like healthcare and fitness advertisements. For example, I find ads for nutritional supplements, sportswear, and gym equipment interesting. They often provide useful information and motivate me to exercise and take better care of my health.

Sugerencia: Use the present perfect for the general experience and the past simple for the specific purchase: “I have bought...” and “A couple of months ago, I bought....” Correct “cosmetes” to “cosmetics” or “a moisturizing cream,” and explain that the celebrity endorsement influenced you. Make the product and reason clear.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have bought something because of an advertisement. A couple of months ago, I bought a moisturizing cream after seeing an advertisement featuring Jenny, a celebrity I really like. I trusted her recommendation, so I decided to try the product.

× I think I can see advertisements on every hour or every thirty minute especially when I watch on social media or YouTube because online platform offers so many advertisements.

✓ I think I can see advertisements every hour or every thirty minutes, especially when I watch videos on social media or YouTube, because online platforms offer so many advertisements.

The plural noun minutes is needed after thirty. Also, platforms should be plural when speaking generally, and advertisements are countable plural nouns.

× I think I can see advertisements on every hour or every thirty minute especially when I watch on social media or YouTube because online platform offers so many advertisements.

✓ I think I can see advertisements every hour or every thirty minutes, especially when I watch videos on social media or YouTube, because online platforms offer so many advertisements.

The preposition on is not used before every hour. Say every hour or once an hour. With watch, specify what you watch, such as watch videos on social media or YouTube.

× I think I can see advertisements on every hour or every thirty minute especially when I watch on social media or YouTube because online platform offers so many advertisements.

✓ I think I can see advertisements every hour or every thirty minutes, especially when I watch videos on social media or YouTube, because online platforms offer so many advertisements.

Watch on social media is incomplete because watch normally needs an object in this context. Adding videos makes the sentence grammatically complete and clearer.

× When I was a child, I was impressed by cartoon movies anything cinema that advertise on the TV and I always attract by the cartoon fashion like t shirts.

✓ When I was a child, I was impressed by cartoon movies or anything at the cinema that was advertised on TV, and I was always attracted to cartoon fashions such as T-shirts.

The advertisements were shown to people, so the passive form was advertised is needed. The phrase I always attract is also incorrect because the speaker receives the feeling; therefore, was attracted is required.

× When I was a child, I was impressed by cartoon movies anything cinema that advertise on the TV and I always attract by the cartoon fashion like t shirts.

✓ When I was a child, I was impressed by cartoon movies or anything at the cinema that was advertised on TV, and I was always attracted to cartoon fashions such as T-shirts.

The ideas cartoon movies and anything at the cinema are alternatives, so or is more suitable than leaving the ideas unconnected. The conjunction and correctly links the two main clauses.

× When I work in there I always see some advertisements whether fashions, cosmetics or some events on the train stations, bus stations, liations, it's quite common.

✓ When I worked there, I always saw advertisements for fashion, cosmetics, or events at train stations and bus stations. It was quite common.

The phrase refers to a past period, so work and see should be changed to the past forms worked and saw. The final clause should also use was because it describes the situation at that past time.

× When I work in there I always see some advertisements whether fashions, cosmetics or some events on the train stations, bus stations, liations, it's quite common.

✓ When I worked there, I always saw advertisements for fashion, cosmetics, or events at train stations and bus stations. It was quite common.

Use at with specific locations such as at train stations and at bus stations. Use for to show what the advertisements promote, such as advertisements for fashion or cosmetics.

× When I work in there I always see some advertisements whether fashions, cosmetics or some events on the train stations, bus stations, liations, it's quite common.

✓ When I worked there, I always saw advertisements for fashion, cosmetics, or events at train stations and bus stations. It was quite common.

The original sentence joins several incomplete ideas with commas. Separating the final idea into a new sentence makes the structure clearer and avoids a comma splice.

× Advertisements brings a lot of benefits to customer.

✓ Advertisements bring a lot of benefits to customers.

The subject advertisements is plural, so it takes the base verb bring, not brings. The general noun customer should also be plural because the statement refers to customers in general.

× Advertisements brings a lot of benefits to customer.

✓ Advertisements bring a lot of benefits to customers.

Customers should be plural because the sentence discusses the general benefits of advertisements for many people.

× It's the first thing that you know the products is the best way to sell to present the products or sometimes it's very.

✓ It is the first thing that helps you know about products, and it is one of the best ways to present and sell them.

The plural noun products requires the plural verb are, not is. The original sentence also contains several clauses without a clear grammatical connection, so the ideas have been reorganized into a complete sentence.

× It's the first thing that you know the products is the best way to sell to present the products or sometimes it's very.

✓ It is the first thing that helps you know about products, and it is one of the best ways to present and sell them.

The pronoun them correctly refers back to the plural noun products and avoids repeating the noun. The sentence also needs a clear subject and verb in the clause describing how advertisements help people learn about products.

× It's the first thing that you know the products is the best way to sell to present the products or sometimes it's very.

✓ It is the first thing that helps you know about products, and it is one of the best ways to present and sell them.

The original sentence is incomplete and combines several ideas without a clear structure. Dividing the ideas into two coordinated clauses creates a complete and understandable sentence.

× To be honest, I always impressed by the advertisements about their health care.

✓ To be honest, I am always impressed by advertisements about health care.

The sentence describes a general present opinion, so use the present passive form am impressed. The verb impressed alone cannot function as the main verb here.

× To be honest, I always impressed by the advertisements about their health care.

✓ To be honest, I am always impressed by advertisements about health care.

The speaker receives the impression from the advertisements, so the passive structure am impressed is required. A passive sentence needs the verb be followed by the past participle.

× Yes, absolutely. I often buy something because of advertisements for the couple months ago I buy some cream cosmetes because Jenny was the presenter of the moisturizer game and I'm a big fan of her.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I often buy things because of advertisements. A couple of months ago, I bought some cosmetic cream because Jenny was the presenter of the moisturizer campaign, and I am a big fan of hers.

Use a before couple: a couple of months ago. The phrase couple months ago is missing an article and the preposition of.

× Yes, absolutely. I often buy something because of advertisements for the couple months ago I buy some cream cosmetes because Jenny was the presenter of the moisturizer game and I'm a big fan of her.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I often buy things because of advertisements. A couple of months ago, I bought some cosmetic cream because Jenny was the presenter of the moisturizer campaign, and I am a big fan of hers.

A couple of months ago refers to a completed past event, so buy must be changed to bought. The present tense am is suitable for the speaker's current opinion.

× Yes, absolutely. I often buy something because of advertisements for the couple months ago I buy some cream cosmetes because Jenny was the presenter of the moisturizer game and I'm a big fan of her.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I often buy things because of advertisements. A couple of months ago, I bought some cosmetic cream because Jenny was the presenter of the moisturizer campaign, and I am a big fan of hers.

The original answer contains several clauses joined without appropriate punctuation or connectors. Separating the general statement from the past example makes the answer grammatically complete and easier to follow.