Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答切题，并且提到了“定向广告”这一具体信息，但句子之间缺少标点和连接词。可以使用“because”或“for example”解释广告为什么会出现，并避免重复使用“my phone or my computer”。注意完整句子的停顿和语法准确性。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements when I use my phone or computer. They appear on social media, shopping websites, and video platforms. In fact, many of them are targeted at me based on what I search for online.

Sugerencia: 回答的主要问题是词语使用不准确，导致意思不清楚。例如，“deeply rotated in my mind”应改为“left a deep impression on me”，“catching jungle”很可能想表达“catchy jingle”。最后一句没有完成，应该补充广告为什么令人印象深刻，例如旋律、画面或重复播放。

Ejemplo: Yes. When I was a child, a Nolviting commercial left a deep impression on me. It had a catchy jingle and colorful jungle scenes. The song was repeated so often that I could still remember part of it years later.

Sugerencia: 回答直接，但“public transports”通常应说“public transport”，“on inside the train carriages”应改为“inside train carriages”或“on the walls inside train carriages”。“a lot of”重复较多，可以用“posters and digital screens”增加具体性。

Ejemplo: Yes, I see quite a lot of advertising on public transport. There are usually posters inside train carriages, as well as advertisements on digital screens at stations. Most of them promote restaurants, apps, or local services.

Sugerencia: “mixed feelings”使用得很好，但“advertisements that is”应改为“advertisements that are”。回答可以更清楚地对比喜欢和不喜欢的情况，并说明具体原因；最后的“Maybe I will buy this product”表达略突兀，可以改为“which may encourage me to try the product”。

Ejemplo: I have mixed feelings about advertisements. I like them when they are creative and introduce useful products, especially things I am already looking for. However, I dislike advertisements that are too frequent or interrupt the videos I am watching.

Sugerencia: 回答有明确观点，但“makeup stuff”重复出现，“I like see”应改为“I like seeing”，而且“make me more beautiful”可以表达得更自然，例如“enhance my appearance”。需要使用连接词分开过长的句子，并具体说明喜欢哪类美妆广告，例如产品演示、使用前后对比或试用评价。

Ejemplo: I particularly like advertisements for makeup and skincare products because I am interested in beauty. I prefer ads that show how a product is applied and explain its benefits clearly. If the product looks effective and suits my needs, I may consider buying it.

Sugerencia: 回答与问题相关，但语法和表达非常不清楚。“some advertisements is”应改为“some advertisements are”，“I will won't I will buy eight”需要重新组织。建议直接说明买过什么、广告展示了什么特点，以及最终购买的结果；避免重复和自我纠正。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. I once bought a lipstick after seeing an advertisement that showed its long-lasting color and natural finish. The advertisement also included a discount, so I decided to try it.

× The platform will show targeted advertisements based on what I search for.

✓ The platform shows targeted advertisements based on what I search for.

这里描述的是平台通常会根据搜索内容展示广告，是一般情况，不是某个特定的将来事件，所以应使用一般现在时。第三人称单数主语“The platform”后面的动词要加-s，使用“shows”。

× They are everywhere online The platform will show targeted advertisements based on what I search for.

✓ They are everywhere online. The platform will show targeted advertisements based on what I search for.

两个完整句子不能直接连接在一起，中间需要句号、分号或连接词。这里可以用句号把它们分开。

× It had a catching jungle and I think that was repetitive and slightly.

✓ It had a catchy jingle, and I think it was repetitive and slightly annoying.

“catching”不能正确表达“容易记住的”，这里应使用形容词“catchy”；“jungle”应为表示广告歌曲的“jingle”。“slightly”是副词，后面需要修饰一个形容词，因此应说“slightly annoying”。

× I always see a lot of advertisements in public transports.

✓ I always see a lot of advertisements on public transport.

“public transport”表示“公共交通”这一整体概念时通常使用不可数形式，不能使用复数“transports”。另外，和公共交通搭配时通常使用介词“on”。

× I often see a lot of posters on inside the train carriages.

✓ I often see a lot of posters inside the train carriages.

“inside”本身已经表示“在……里面”，前面不需要再加介词“on”。因此应直接使用“inside the train carriages”。

× Usually I like some advertisements that is very interesting and can introduce some useful products to me.

✓ Usually, I like some advertisements that are very interesting and can introduce me to some useful products.

关系代词“that”指代复数名词“advertisements”，所以后面的系动词必须使用复数形式“are”，不能使用“is”。

× I like see the advertisements about to make up stuff.

✓ I like seeing advertisements about makeup products.

“like”后面可以接动词的-ing形式，因此“like see”应改为“like seeing”。“makeup”作名词或形容词表示“化妆品/化妆的”，应写成一个词；“make up”是动词短语，不能放在这里。

× Often some advertisements is very special.

✓ Often, some advertisements are very special.

主语“some advertisements”是复数，所以系动词应使用复数形式“are”，不能使用单数形式“is”。

× They show the they show their makeup stuff is very useful.

✓ They show that their makeup products are very useful.

原句中“They show the they show”重复且结构不完整。表达“他们展示/说明某事”时，可以使用“show that + 从句”。从句的主语“their makeup products”是复数，因此使用“are”。

× I will won't I will buy eight.

✓ I will buy it.

“will”和“won’t”分别表示肯定和否定，不能在同一个句子中连续使用。表达将来会购买某物时，只需使用“will + 动词原形”，即“will buy”。

× I will buy eight.

✓ I will buy it.

这里的“eight”不是合适的代词，应该使用“it”指代前面提到的某件化妆品或产品。注意“it”用于指代单数事物。