Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Em trả lời đúng hướng nhưng có nhiều lỗi dùng từ và cấu trúc khiến ý nghĩa không rõ, chẳng hạn “say advertisement” nên đổi thành “see advertisements”, và “who used” nên đổi thành “anyone who uses”. Hãy mở đầu trực tiếp bằng tần suất, sau đó nêu một vị trí cụ thể như mạng xã hội hoặc trang web. Tránh lặp lại “I think” và “advertisement”; chỉ cần 2–3 câu rõ ràng.

Ejemplo: Yes, I see advertisements almost every time I use my phone or computer. They usually appear on social media, video platforms, and websites. Most of them are related to things I have searched for recently.

Sugerencia: Em có ý tưởng cụ thể về quảng cáo gấu bông, nhưng câu trả lời bị ngắt quãng và kết thúc không hoàn chỉnh. Hãy dùng “an advertisement” thay vì “a advertisement”, dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán (“was colourful”, “had...”), và giải thích rõ quảng cáo gây ấn tượng như thế nào. Từ “cartid” và cụm “makes the toilet look” không phù hợp hoặc chưa hoàn chỉnh, nên thay bằng một đặc điểm chính xác, ví dụ “a catchy jingle” hoặc “a funny cartoon character”.

Ejemplo: Yes. When I was a child, I saw an advertisement for a teddy bear that really caught my attention. It was colourful and included a catchy song and a funny cartoon character. I wanted to have the bear because it looked soft and friendly.

Sugerencia: Em cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng cấu trúc “Yes, I see...”, không dùng “say” thay cho “see”. Từ “birth” có vẻ không đúng ngữ cảnh; nếu muốn nói xe buýt, hãy dùng “buses”. Hãy nêu nơi quảng cáo xuất hiện, chẳng hạn trên cửa sổ, bên trong toa tàu hoặc tại nhà ga, rồi đưa ra một nhận xét cụ thể. Tránh lặp “always” và “it is very popular” khi chưa giải thích rõ ý.

Ejemplo: Yes, I see quite a lot of advertisements on buses and trains. They are usually placed on the walls, windows, and inside the carriages. I often notice adverts for restaurants, universities, and mobile phone companies.

Sugerencia: Em đã cố gắng đưa ra sự đối lập giữa quá khứ và hiện tại, nhưng cần sửa nhiều cấu trúc: “When I was a child”, “they impressed me”, “advertisements are annoying”, và “waste my time”. Hãy nêu quan điểm rõ ràng ngay câu đầu, sau đó giải thích lý do bằng một ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng “however” hoặc “these days” để liên kết ý và tránh các từ không rõ nghĩa như “agit” và “salter”.

Ejemplo: I used to like advertisements when I was a child because they were colourful and entertaining. However, these days I find many of them annoying, especially when they interrupt online videos. They often waste my time and make it difficult to focus on what I am watching.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời chưa nêu rõ loại quảng cáo em thích và có nhiều từ bị dùng sai, đặc biệt “embarrassed” không phù hợp với ý muốn diễn đạt. Nếu em không thích quảng cáo, hãy trả lời trực tiếp: “I do not particularly like advertisements”, rồi có thể nói loại ít gây khó chịu nhất. Không nên lặp “so” và “no/none”; hãy dùng “however” để nối ý và đưa ra một lý do cụ thể.

Ejemplo: I do not particularly like advertisements, but I prefer short online adverts that provide useful information. For example, adverts for new restaurants or travel discounts can be helpful. I dislike advertisements that are too loud or appear repeatedly.

Sugerencia: Đây là câu trả lời rõ ý nhất, vì em trả lời trực tiếp và đưa ra ví dụ về bà của mình. Tuy nhiên, cần sửa “my grandmother have” thành “my grandmother has”, “a electronic” thành “an electronic”, và dùng “an advertisement” hoặc “an advert”. Hãy mô tả cụ thể thiết bị đó là gì và giải thích quảng cáo đã thuyết phục bà như thế nào. Dùng “although” hoặc “however” để liên kết hai ý tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: No, I have never bought anything because of an advertisement. However, my grandmother once bought an electronic device after seeing an advert for it. She was impressed by its useful features and the special discount mentioned in the advertisement.

× Yes obviously I always say advertisement when I use my phone and it is very popular and I think who used a mobile phone or computer to say something, I think we have advertisement.

✓ Yes, obviously. I always see advertisements when I use my phone, and they are very common. I think anyone who uses a mobile phone or computer sees advertisements.

The plural noun advertisements is needed because the speaker is referring to advertisements in general. Also, anyone takes the singular verb uses, and the pronoun they correctly refers to the plural noun advertisements.

× Yes obviously I always say advertisement when I use my phone and it is very popular and I think who used a mobile phone or computer to say something, I think we have advertisement.

✓ Yes, obviously. I always see advertisements when I use my phone, and there are advertisements whenever people use mobile phones or computers.

Use there are to introduce the existence of plural nouns. The expression we have advertisement is not the appropriate structure for saying that advertisements exist.

× Yes obviously I always say advertisement when I use my phone and it is very popular and I think who used a mobile phone or computer to say something, I think we have advertisement.

✓ Yes, obviously. I always see advertisements when I use my phone, and I think anyone who uses a mobile phone or computer sees advertisements.

This answer describes a general situation, so the present simple is required. Therefore, used should be uses after anyone, and sees is used for the general result.

× Yes when I was okay I very I was very impressed by a advertisement for a teddy bear that really caught my attention because it was colourful and has a cartid. I like it because it makes the toilet look

✓ Yes. When I was young, I was very impressed by an advertisement for a teddy bear that really caught my attention because it was colourful and had a cartoon character. I liked it because it made the toy look attractive.

Use an before advertisement because advertisement begins with a vowel sound. The article a is also needed before a singular countable noun such as cartoon character.

× Yes when I was okay I very I was very impressed by a advertisement for a teddy bear that really caught my attention because it was colourful and has a cartid. I like it because it makes the toilet look

✓ Yes. When I was young, I was very impressed by an advertisement for a teddy bear that really caught my attention because it was colourful and had a cartoon character. I liked it because it made the toy look attractive.

The question asks about an experience in childhood, so the past simple is appropriate. Has, like, and makes should become had, liked, and made.

× I always say a lot of advertising on birth because it is very popular and it is always always a text many people like elderly people to see

✓ I always see a lot of advertising on buses because it is very common, and there are always advertisements that many people, especially elderly people, like to see.

The original sentence contains several incomplete and incorrectly connected parts. The revised version uses a complete clause, the relative clause that many people like to see, and especially to add the example of elderly people clearly.

× I always say a lot of advertising on birth because it is very popular and it is always always a text many people like elderly people to see

✓ I always see a lot of advertising on buses because it is very common, and there are always advertisements that many people, especially elderly people, like to see.

Use there are before the plural noun advertisements to express that advertisements exist in a particular place or situation.

× When I just agit, I think it is very impressed me, but now and then I think advertisement are annoying for me and it makes my time to be salter.

✓ When I was a child, I was very impressed by advertisements, but now I think advertisements are annoying, and they make my time more stressful.

The correct passive structure is was impressed by advertisements. The advertisement causes the feeling, so the speaker should say I was impressed, not it is impressed me.

× When I just agit, I think it is very impressed me, but now and then I think advertisement are annoying for me and it makes my time to be salter.

✓ When I was a child, I was very impressed by advertisements, but now I think advertisements are annoying, and they make my time more stressful.

The phrase when I was a child refers to a past period, so was impressed is required. The past form was also correct in the time expression when I was a child.

× When I just agit, I think it is very impressed me, but now and then I think advertisement are annoying for me and it makes my time to be salter.

✓ When I was a child, I was very impressed by advertisements, but now I think advertisements are annoying, and they make my time more stressful.

Advertisements is plural, so it must be followed by are, not is. The pronoun they refers to advertisements, so the verb must be make, not makes.

× There are many kinds of advertisements but I think for me no none of them embarrassed me so I don't like every advertisement so

✓ There are many kinds of advertisements, but none of them appeals to me, so I do not like any of them.

Do not use no and none together. In a negative sentence, any is more appropriate than every when the meaning is that not one advertisement is liked.

× There are many kinds of advertisements but I think for me no none of them embarrassed me so I don't like every advertisement so

✓ There are many kinds of advertisements, but none of them appeals to me, so I do not like any of them.

The original sentence contains repeated connectors and an incomplete expression. The revised version uses one clear contrast with but and one logical result with so.

× I haven't ever bought something because of an advertisement but my grandmother have bought something because she was very impressed by advertisement about something like a electronic device.

✓ I have never bought anything because of an advertisement, but my grandmother has bought something because she was very impressed by an advertisement about an electronic device.

The subject my grandmother is third-person singular, so the present perfect auxiliary must be has, not have.

× I haven't ever bought something because of an advertisement but my grandmother have bought something because she was very impressed by advertisement about something like a electronic device.

✓ I have never bought anything because of an advertisement, but my grandmother has bought something because she was very impressed by an advertisement about an electronic device.

In a negative sentence, anything is normally used instead of something. The phrase have never bought anything is the natural negative form.

× I haven't ever bought something because of an advertisement but my grandmother have bought something because she was very impressed by advertisement about something like a electronic device.

✓ I have never bought anything because of an advertisement, but my grandmother has bought something because she was very impressed by an advertisement about an electronic device.

Advertisement is a singular countable noun, so it needs the indefinite article an. Use an before electronic because electronic begins with a vowel sound.