Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答方向正确，也表达了广告令人烦恼的观点，但第二句有多处严重的语法和搭配问题，如“as growth some short videos”“I can sell them”。建议先直接回答频率，再说明广告出现的位置和影响，并使用“especially when”连接细节。注意说“interrupt what I am doing”，而不是“interrupt me what I am doing”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I see advertisements almost every day when I use my phone or computer. They usually appear before short videos or during online shows. I find them quite annoying because they often interrupt what I am doing.

Sugerencia: 你提供了具体的广告名称、产品类型和广告歌曲，这是很好的细节，但语法准确性较低。应说“an advertisement that made a deep impression on me”“The promotional song was catchy”，并避免对考官说“I think you know”。最后一句需要明确表达“我仍然记得这首歌/旋律”，不要使用不清楚的“that ran up”。

Ejemplo: Yes, one advertisement that made a deep impression on me was for a milk-tea shop called Mi Shui Ice Cream and Tea. I saw it when I was a child, and its promotional song was really catchy. I can still remember the melody today.

Sugerencia: 回答了“经常看到”这一核心问题，也提到了墙上和地铁上的广告，但“in community”与问题语境不匹配，且“on the subway trains”不如“inside subway trains”自然。建议使用“usually”“for example”等连接词，并具体说明广告的常见位置。

Ejemplo: Yes, I see quite a lot of advertising on public transport. For example, there are advertisements on the walls of subway stations and inside the trains. I notice them almost every day, especially during my commute.

Sugerencia: 你尝试根据广告的位置表达不同态度，这是一个清晰的观点，但句子结构混乱，时态和搭配错误较多。应说“It depends on where they are”，并用“However”连接相反情况。把“post attracting posters”改为“eye-catching posters”，同时明确说明你喜欢这类广告的原因。

Ejemplo: It depends on where they are. I dislike advertisements stuck on library walls because they look distracting and inappropriate. However, when I am out with friends, I sometimes enjoy eye-catching posters for shops or restaurants because they may introduce interesting products.

Sugerencia: 内容比较切题，并且提供了服装、鞋子和化妆品等具体例子；不过“outsult”不是正确单词，可能想表达“outlook”或“visual style”。“promotional advertisements”重复且不够自然。建议直接说明喜欢时尚广告，并用“because”解释它们如何帮助你了解潮流。

Ejemplo: I particularly like fashion advertisements. I enjoy their stylish designs and the way they present trendy clothes, shoes, and cosmetics. They also help me keep up with the latest trends and give me ideas about what to buy.

Sugerencia: 你直接回答了“买过”，但没有清楚说明是被什么广告影响以及购买结果。“library shows”在此处不合适，可能想说“online shows”或“livestreams”；“in that”也应改为“because of them”。建议补充一个具体产品，并说明广告展示了哪些信息。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have bought cosmetics because of advertisements on short-video apps and livestreams. One advertisement showed how a particular face cream improved the presenter’s skin, so I decided to try it. Fortunately, the product worked quite well, so I was satisfied with my purchase.

× I think that is something I cannot avoid in a single day especially as growth some short videos or various shows I can sell them.

✓ I think that is something I cannot avoid in a single day, especially when I scroll through short videos or watch various shows online.

原句中“as growth...”和“I can sell them”无法构成正确、完整的句子结构。表达观看短视频或节目时，建议使用“when I scroll through...”和“watch various shows...”这样的完整结构。

× I find them quite annoying because they often interrupt me what I am doing.

✓ I find them quite annoying because they often interrupt what I am doing.

“interrupt”后面可以直接接宾语从句“what I am doing”，不能在从句前再加“me”。如果想保留“me”，可以说“They often interrupt me while I am doing something.”

× Yes, of course there was advertisement made deep impression on me when I was a child.

✓ Yes, of course, there was an advertisement that made a deep impression on me when I was a child.

可数名词“advertisement”是单数，前面需要使用不定冠词“an”。固定搭配是“make a deep impression”，所以“deep impression”前也需要加“a”。同时，使用“that made...”连接后面的定语从句，句子结构更完整。

× The promotional songs was really chatty.

✓ The promotional song was really catchy.

主语“song”是单数，因此应使用“song was”；如果使用复数“songs”，则应使用“songs were”。此外，“catchy”表示歌曲朗朗上口，比“chatty”更符合语境。

× I still remember that ran up.

✓ I still remember it.

“that ran up”中的代词和动词搭配不正确，且句子缺少清晰的主语。这里可以用宾格代词“it”指代这首宣传歌曲，表达“I still remember it”。

× I think it's something that I couldn't avoid in a single day.

✓ I think it's something that I can't avoid in a single day.

题目询问的是现在经常发生的情况，因此应使用一般现在时“can't”，而不是过去式“couldn't”。

× Maybe most of the time in community.

✓ Maybe most of the time in the community.

“community”在这里表示特定的社区环境，通常需要使用定冠词“the”，所以应说“in the community”。

× I saw some little advertisements on the wall or the subway trains.

✓ I see some small advertisements on the walls or on subway trains.

这是对目前通常情况的描述，应使用一般现在时“see”，而不是过去式“saw”。表示多个墙面时使用“walls”；在两个地点前分别使用“on”可以使结构更清楚。

× It's depend on where is it.

✓ It depends on where it is.

主语“It”是第三人称单数，一般现在时的动词应加“-s”，所以“depend”应改为“depends”。

× It's depend on where is it.

✓ It depends on where it is.

“where it is”是间接疑问句，疑问词后应使用陈述句语序，即“where + 主语 + 谓语”，不能使用直接疑问句语序“where is it”。

× If I saw some advertisements stuck on the library wall, it's strange.

✓ If I see some advertisements stuck on a library wall, I find it strange.

这里描述的是通常情况下的看法，应使用一般现在时“see”，而不是过去式“saw”。条件句“If...”中也应使用一般现在时。

× If I saw some advertisements stuck on the library wall, it's strange.

✓ If I see some advertisements stuck on a library wall, I find it strange.

“a library wall”表示图书馆的一面墙，属于泛指，因此使用不定冠词“a”。如果特指双方都知道的某一面墙，也可以说“the library wall”。

× When I When I hang out with my friend I see some post attracting posters I am waiting to buy something about it.

✓ When I hang out with my friends, I see some attractive posters for products that I might want to buy.

原句有重复的“When I”，并且“post attracting posters”“I am waiting to buy something about it”的结构不完整、意思不清。应删除重复部分，并使用“attractive posters for products that I might want to buy”构成完整句子。

× I bought some cosmetics and clothes in that.

✓ I bought some cosmetics and clothes because of an advertisement.

“in that”不能正确指代前文的广告，也不符合“因为广告而购买”的表达。这里应使用“because of an advertisement”；如果前文明确提到多个广告，也可以说“because of them”。