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Sugerencia: 回答要更直接并注意句子连贯与语法，避免重复。可以先给出主题句，再用1-2个细节说明频率和感受，并使用连接词（for example, because）使表达更自然。注意时态和冠词使用，如“in shop videos”应为“in shopping videos”或“in shop videos on social media”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on my phone and computer. For example, ads often appear in shopping videos and pop-ups while I browse, and because they interrupt what I'm doing, they can be quite annoying.

Sugerencia: 回答需要更清晰的时间和细节表达，纠正发音拼写错误（如“chuckily”应为“chocolate”或“chubby”根据意图）。先说明记得哪类广告，再描述广告特点和你的反应，使用连接词如“because”或“so”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I remember a chocolate advertisement from my childhood because it showed the chocolate melting and looking very tasty. As a result, I always wanted to ask my parents to buy it.

Sugerencia: 回答要更自然并使用恰当的短语，例如“on public transport”或“inside trains”。给出一两个具体例子（如posters, digital screens）并用连接词衔接，避免模糊描述“on the road of windows”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on public transport, especially inside trains where there are posters and digital screens. For example, I frequently notice ads for travel apps and smartphones.

Sugerencia: 回答需要更自然的表达与原因说明。先给出立场句，然后用一两句说明为什么喜欢，例如消磨时间或发现新产品。注意语法（watching adverts vs. watching advertisements）和词序。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I often watch short ads on my phone while waiting in line because they help pass the time, and sometimes I discover interesting products.

Sugerencia: 回答应更准确地描述原因与细节。“firm”用词不当，应改为“appealing”或“tempting”。结构上先给主题句，然后用连接词说明原因并举例，使表达简洁有力。

Ejemplo: I prefer food advertisements, especially for snacks like chocolate and cookies, because the visuals make them look very tempting and I often feel like buying them.

Sugerencia: 回答需更连贯并修正语法与词汇（“sharp videos”不明确，可改为“short videos” or “stylish videos”）。给出具体情境和结果，使用连接词如“because”或“so”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I once bought a T-shirt after seeing it in a short video because the design looked really cool, so I ordered it online.

× Yes, I do when I use my phone or computer, I see advertisements for example, I can see them in shop videos or it can make me feel annoying.

✓ Yes, I do. When I use my phone or computer, I see advertisements. For example, I can see them in shopping videos, and they can make me feel annoyed.

句子包含多个时态和句子结构问题。原句缺少句子间的标点，且“it can make me feel annoying”中主语与表语不匹配。用现在时描述经常发生的事情是合适的，应把句子拆成更清晰的短句；“shop videos”更自然表达为“shopping videos”；“make me feel annoying”应改为“make me feel annoyed”（用形容词描述人的感受）。建议使用简单句或用连词连接，注意主语一致性和形容词/分词的正确使用。

× Yes, after call, I still remember chocolate advertisements when I was a child.

✓ Yes, after that, I still remember the chocolate advertisements from my childhood.

原句时态和短语使用不当。“after call”不符合英语习惯，应为“after that”或去掉；谈论过去的印象用过去或现在完成时都可，这里用现在时“remember”也可，但需要明确时间范围，故用“from my childhood”。同时“chocolate advertisements”前加定冠词更自然。建议用标准时间状语表达。

× The chuckily look really delicious, I wanted to buy it.

✓ The chocolate looked really delicious, so I wanted to buy it.

原句中“chuckily”不是正确词汇，可能想说“chocolate”或“chocolatey/juicy”之类；“look”与主语时态不一致，应为过去式“looked”；句子应使用连词“so”连接因果关系。建议检查拼写并保持时态一致。

× Yes, of course I see many advertisements on transport they are on the road of windows.

✓ Yes, of course I see many advertisements on public transport; they are on the sides of the windows.

原句中“on transport”应更具体为“on public transport”；“on the road of windows”是错误搭配，意图是窗户旁或窗户侧面，正确表达为“on the sides of the windows”。另外句子缺少标点，建议使用分号或分句。

× I see many different types.

✓ I see many different types of advertisements.

原句省略了宾语，应明确“different types of advertisements”。保持现在时描述经常看到的事物。建议在不完整句后补上名词以完整表达。

× Yes, definitely. When I use my phone watching advertisements it's a good way to queue time.

✓ Yes, definitely. When I watch advertisements on my phone, it's a good way to pass the time while waiting in a queue.

原句结构混乱，“When I use my phone watching advertisements”应改为“When I watch advertisements on my phone”。“queue time”不是自然表达，意图是“打发排队的时间”，应使用“pass the time while waiting in a queue”或“kill time”。建议理清时间状语和主句的关系并使用惯用表达。

× So I really enjoy advertisements.

✓ So I really enjoy watching advertisements.

原句语义上可理解，但更自然的表达是“enjoy watching advertisements”而不是直接“enjoy advertisements”，因为是享受观看这一动作。建议在动词后加动名词以明确动作对象。

× I like snack advertisements for example, chocolate and cookies because they look really delicious and firm, I want to buy them.

✓ I like snack advertisements, for example those for chocolate and cookies, because they look really delicious and appealing, and I want to buy them.

原句中“firm”用法不当，描述食物应使用“appealing”或“tasty”；句子应拆分或用连词连接以避免逗号拼接错误。建议选择描述外观或味道的恰当形容词并保持句子连贯。

× Yes, of course I bought a t shirt because of sharp videos the t shirt looks a really cool. I decided to buy it

✓ Yes, of course. I bought a T-shirt because of short videos; the T-shirt looked really cool, so I decided to buy it.

原句多个问题：1) “sharp videos”应为“short videos”；2) 缺少标点，导致句子粘连；3) “looks a really cool”语法错误，形容词用法和冠词位置不对；需要将动词保持过去时“looked”，并用连词“so”说明因果。建议注意拼写、标点以及形容词搭配和时态一致。