Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then briefly support it. Correct grammar (e.g., use past participles and appropriate articles) and avoid redundancy. Keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I rarely see ads on my phone or computer because I bought premium subscriptions for most social media apps. This removes most in-app ads, so my browsing is usually uninterrupted.

Sugerencia: Good structure: clear topic sentence and supporting details. Improve by using more precise vocabulary and one linking phrase to make it coherent, and avoid fillers like "like". Add a specific detail or effect to make the memory vivid.

Ejemplo: Yes, a soft drink commercial impressed me as a child. It showed friends laughing and playing on a sunny beach, with upbeat music that created an energetic atmosphere, so it made the product seem fun and youthful.

Sugerencia: Make a clear, grammatical topic sentence and finish your supporting idea. Use linking words and specific examples. Correct tense agreement and avoid incomplete sentences. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on public transport in my city. For example, buses and trains often have posters, ads on carriage walls, and digital screens, which I think are effective because they reach many commuters during their journeys.

Sugerencia: Good balanced answer with reasons. Improve by fixing minor grammar (remove extraneous words), using linking words for coherence, and giving a brief example of an ad you like or dislike to be more specific.

Ejemplo: It depends. I dislike ads that interrupt videos or appear repeatedly because they are annoying; however, I appreciate ads that are creative or show useful products, such as a short tutorial that introduced me to a helpful kitchen gadget.

Sugerencia: Good idea and clear preference. Use accurate vocabulary ("horrorous" is incorrect — say "humorous" or "thought-provoking"), and give a brief specific example of a short story ad. Use linking words to compare.

Ejemplo: I prefer creative or humorous advertisements, especially those that tell a short story. For instance, a two-minute ad that follows a character solving a problem is much more memorable than a plain list of product features.

Sugerencia: Clarify product names and reasons, remove repetitions and unfinished thoughts. Give one clear example: what you bought, where you saw the ad, and why you decided to purchase. Use past tense and keep it within a few sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes. I bought a Medihu Tonopart skin product after seeing several TikTok videos that reviewed it. The users showed before-and-after results, which convinced me it might suit my skin, so I decided to try it.

× Actually I bought a premium account for all the social media that I will not to see the advertisements on my phone or computer so no that

✓ Actually, I bought a premium account for all the social media so that I would not see advertisements on my phone or computer.

Error: incorrect verb construction 'will not to see' and awkward clause order. Type 10 applies because 'to see' misuse and modal/tense choice are wrong. Use 'would not see' to match the past decision (bought) and purpose clause 'so that'. Remove extraneous words ('no that'). Suggestion: use 'so that I would not see' or 'so I don't see' depending on intended time reference.

× However, I don't remember all the detail now.

✓ However, I don't remember all the details now.

Error: singular/plural noun usage with 'detail' should be plural 'details' to refer to multiple pieces of information. This fits the past participle type insofar as noun agreement correction is needed (ID 9 used as closest); correct by using plural when referring to multiple items.

× Yes, definitely when I started in Hanok there are advertisements almost everywhere on public transport, particularly on bus and trains you can see them on the wheels inside the carriage and sometimes even on the digital screens I think they are quite effective because commuters

✓ Yes, definitely. When I started in Hanoi there were advertisements almost everywhere on public transport. Particularly on buses and trains you can see them on the walls inside the carriage and sometimes even on digital screens. I think they are quite effective because commuters...

Multiple errors: incorrect preposition/word choice 'in Hanok' likely meant 'in Hanoi' (proper noun), tense and agreement ('there are' should be 'there were' to match 'when I started'), singular/plural ('bus and trains' -> 'buses and trains'), incorrect body part 'wheels' should be 'walls', run-on sentence issues. Suggestions: break into shorter sentences, ensure place names are correct, match tense to context, and use plural nouns for general cases.

× To be honest, I it depends.

✓ To be honest, it depends.

Error: extraneous pronoun 'I' creates an ungrammatical subject. The correct subject for 'depends' here is 'it'. Remove the extra 'I'. Suggestion: say 'I guess it depends' if intending to include 'I'.

× I quite like creative and horrorous advertisements, especially ones that tell a short story.

✓ I quite like creative and humorous advertisements, especially ones that tell a short story.

Error: 'horrorous' is not a correct word; likely intended 'humorous' or 'horror' related. This is an adjective choice error. Suggest choosing 'humorous' if meaning funny ads, or 'horror' as noun-based genre 'horror advertisements' if intended. Ensure adjective form matches meaning.

× Yes. Actually I bought the Tonopart as much of Medihu brand because I saw the reveals of a KLC on TikTok and I feel like oh it's suitable for me and I bought that one and I feel like oh yeah not actually every

✓ Yes. Actually I bought the Tonopart mask of the Medihu brand because I saw a review of a K-beauty creator on TikTok and I felt it was suitable for me, so I bought it.

Multiple problems: singular/plural and word choice. 'Tonopart as much of Medihu brand' unclear; likely 'Tonopart mask of the Medihu brand'. 'reveals of a KLC' likely 'review of a K-beauty creator' or 'K-beauty influencer'. Tense consistency: use past 'felt' and 'bought'. Remove redundant phrases 'I feel like oh yeah not actually every'. Suggest simplifying and using correct nouns and past tense verbs.