Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và mắc lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ thiếu mạo từ, động từ chia sai). Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ dùng từ nối thích hợp. Hạn chế độ dài dưới 5 câu và cố gắng dùng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: "personalized ads" thay vì "ads on ads").

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer. They appear on social media, websites and streaming platforms, and many of them are personalized based on my recent searches or purchases. Because of this personalization, I often notice products that match my interests.

Sugerencia: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và trật tự từ (thời thái quá, động từ nguyên mẫu), dùng từ chính xác hơn và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn. Nên dùng một câu chủ đề rồi cung cấp lý do và một kỷ niệm cụ thể, tránh câu lủng củng. Ví dụ sửa các cụm như "it's air" → "it aired", "want to inter own" → "wanted to own".

Ejemplo: Yes, a toy car commercial really impressed me when I was a child. It had a catchy jingle that played on TV every evening, and I would sing along with it. Because the ad made the toy look exciting and fun, I desperately wanted to own that car.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần bắt đầu trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, tránh lỗi cấu trúc (ví dụ không dùng 'Yet' sai chỗ). Sử dụng từ nối hợp lý để liệt kê và giải thích, đồng thời sửa lỗi từ vựng như 'for trains' → 'and trains'. Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể để tăng tính thuyết phục.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and buses. They range from posters to digital screens and usually promote movies, products or local services. Because they are placed near seats and doors, they easily attract passengers' attention.

Sugerencia: Cần hoàn thành ý và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, chính tả (ví dụ 'advertisement' → 'advertisements', 'cattoo' unclear, câu cuối bị bỏ dở). Nên nêu rõ thích hay không, đưa ví dụ cụ thể về một quảng cáo thú vị và lý do rõ ràng. Tránh câu bị cắt ngang và dùng liên từ hợp lý.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like some advertisements because they are creative and often entertaining. For example, a recent commercial used a funny character and a memorable slogan, which made me remember the brand. I also appreciate ads that inform me about useful new products.

Sugerencia: Cần dùng cấu trúc đúng (ví dụ 'humorous advertising' hoặc 'humorous ads'), tránh lỗi chia động từ và lặp từ. Bổ sung lý do cụ thể vì sao thích quảng cáo hài hước (tạo cảm xúc, dễ nhớ) và một ví dụ cá nhân. Giữ câu dưới 5 câu, dùng liên từ để nối ý.

Ejemplo: I prefer humorous ads because they make me laugh and are easy to remember. For instance, a funny commercial that went viral last year made me share it with my friends because it was clever and relatable. Humorous ads often encourage me to talk about the brand afterward.

× I encounter advertisements everywhere whenever I use my phone computer.

✓ I encounter advertisements everywhere whenever I use my phone or computer.

The sentence is missing the coordinating preposition 'or' between 'phone' and 'computer' to show the alternative devices. Without it, the nouns are incorrectly juxtaposed. Use 'or' to link alternatives: 'phone or computer'. Additionally, consider adding an article if needed: 'my phone or my computer.'

× They appear everywhere on social media, platforms, websites, and even within ads.

✓ They appear everywhere: on social media, platforms, websites, and even within apps.

The original placement of 'within ads' is confusing and likely incorrect; 'apps' fits context better. Ensure adverbial phrase ordering is clear by listing media types after a colon or commas. Replace 'ads' with 'apps' to avoid the nonsensical 'ads within ads.'

× I've noticed that ads on ads are personalized based on my recent searches or shopping habits.

✓ I've noticed that ads are personalized based on my recent searches or shopping habits.

'Ads on ads' is redundant and ungrammatical. Remove the repeated noun to make the adjective-adverb structure correct: 'ads are personalized.' The verb 'are personalized based on' is correct for passive voice here.

× It featured a catchy jingle that I would sing along to every time it's air.

✓ It featured a catchy jingle that I would sing along to every time it aired.

The clause mixes past reference ('featured', 'would sing') with present-tense 'it's air'. Use past tense 'aired' to match the past context. Also 'it's air' is ungrammatical; the correct past form of 'to air' is 'aired.'

× I believe it's worth for a toy car and I remember desperately want to inter own it.

✓ I believed it was worth a toy car, and I remember desperately wanting to own it.

Multiple issues: 'it's worth for a toy car' is incorrect collocation—use 'worth' with a noun or 'worth buying'—here 'it was worth a toy car' is awkward but corrected to past tense 'believed' to match context. 'Remember desperately want to inter own it' has wrong verb forms and extra word 'inter'. Use 'remember desperately wanting to own it.' Change 'want' to the gerund 'wanting' after 'remember' for past recollection.

× Yet public transport is filled with advertisements ranging from posters to digital screens, I see ads for new movies, products and services on buses for trains.

✓ Public transport is filled with advertisements ranging from posters to digital screens; I see ads for new movies, products, and services on buses and trains.

Starting with 'Yet' is unnecessary and punctuation error: comma splice between clauses. Replace with a semicolon or separate sentences. Also 'on buses for trains' is wrong preposition—use 'and' to list both 'buses and trains.' Add Oxford comma for clarity.

× They are strategically placed to capture the attention of passengers and they change frequently, so they're always something new to see.

✓ They are strategically placed to capture the attention of passengers, and they change frequently, so there is always something new to see.

'They're always something new to see' uses 'they're' (they are) which is awkward; better to use 'there is always something new to see.' Also add comma before 'and' to join independent clauses correctly.

× I do enjoy advertisement because it's quite entertaining and creative.

✓ I do enjoy advertisements because they are quite entertaining and creative.

Use plural 'advertisements' or the article 'the advertisement'—singular 'advertisement' without article is incorrect. Also 'it's' refers to singular; when using plural, change to 'they are.'

× Some ads have cattoo jingles or memorable slogans that stick with me.

✓ Some ads have catchy jingles or memorable slogans that stick with me.

'Cattoo' is a misspelling or wrong word. Use the adjective 'catchy' to describe jingles. The rest of the sentence is fine.

× Additionally, they keep me informed about new products and services and if I analyzing marketing strategies using

✓ Additionally, they keep me informed about new products and services, and they help when I am analyzing marketing strategies.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains a fragment 'if I analyzing marketing strategies using'. Fix structure by completing the clause: 'they help when I am analyzing marketing strategies.' Use 'am analyzing' (present continuous) after 'when' and include the verb 'help' to connect ideas.

× I enjoy humor's advertising because it's made me laugh and it's remarkable.

✓ I enjoy humorous advertising because it makes me laugh and is memorable.

'Humor's advertising' is incorrect possessive; use adjective 'humorous advertising.' 'It's made me laugh' mixes tenses—use present simple 'makes me laugh.' 'Remarkable' can be replaced with 'memorable' for natural collocation.

× Some ads go often go viral, makes them more engaging and I frequently share them with my friends on social media for good love.

✓ Some ads often go viral, which makes them more engaging, and I frequently share them with my friends on social media.

Remove duplicate 'go' and correct structure: 'which makes them' to link cause and effect. The phrase 'for good love' is unclear and unnecessary; remove it. Use commas to separate clauses.