Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct small grammar issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repeating ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes. I often see ads on my phone, especially on apps like TikTok. However, they usually distract me from the videos I want to watch, so I tend to skip them quickly.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and give one clear specific detail. Begin with a topic sentence naming the ad, then explain why it impressed you with one linking word and concrete description.

Ejemplo: Yes. When I was a child, I remember a Skittles commercial. It was very colorful and showed a rainbow, which made the ad feel fun and memorable to me.

Sugerencia: Correct vocabulary and sentence structure, avoid filler words, and finish your thought. Start with a direct answer, then give one clear reason and an example using a linking word.

Ejemplo: Yes. I often see many adverts on buses and trains. Because I get bored during the journey, these posters or screens sometimes catch my attention and help pass the time.

Sugerencia: Use correct tense and phrasing, reduce fillers, and provide a clear contrast. Start with a direct statement of preference, then contrast past and present with a linking word and one reason.

Ejemplo: Not really. I enjoyed ads as a child because they were funny, but now I find them boring and distracting when I use social media, so I usually skip them.

Sugerencia: Be specific and use present tense. State the type of ads you like, then give one concrete reason and an example, avoiding fillers and repetition.

Ejemplo: I prefer adverts for sweets and chocolate because they are colorful and humorous; for example, a short funny story about characters enjoying candy often makes me smile.

× One in my childhood, I see one advertisement.

✓ When I was a child, I saw an advertisement.

The sentence refers to a past time ('childhood'), so the verb should be in the past tense ('saw') and the time expression should be natural ('When I was a child'). Also unnecessary repetition ('one') was removed for clarity.

× It's a candy Skittles.

✓ It was a Skittles candy.

Use the past tense 'was' to match the past context. 'Skittles' is a brand name and should follow 'a' with 'candy' after it: 'a Skittles candy' or simply 'Skittles'. The article placement and word order were corrected.

× It was very colorful and they were, they were a rainbow and it gave me some funny expressions.

✓ It was very colorful; it looked like a rainbow and gave me funny feelings.

The subject is a single advertisement or candy, so singular pronouns ('it') should be used consistently. 'They were' was incorrect. 'Gave me some funny expressions' is unnatural; 'gave me funny feelings' or 'made me smile' is clearer. Verbs were adjusted for agreement and natural phrasing.

× I usually go by bus and tune up on the way.

✓ I usually go by bus and pass the time on the way.

'Tune up on the way' is incorrect. The proper phrase to say you occupy yourself while traveling is 'pass the time' or 'kill time'. Preposition and verb choice were corrected.

× I see some advertisements of some umm companies and it's little bit interesting for me because I feel boring when I'm on the bus and it.

✓ I see advertisements from some companies and they are a little bit interesting to me because I feel bored when I'm on the bus.

Use 'advertisements from' or 'ads for' rather than 'advertisements of'. 'It's little bit interesting' should be 'they are a little bit interesting' to agree with plural 'advertisements'. 'I feel boring' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I feel bored' to describe one's state.

× In my childhood I used to enjoy watching advertisements because they made me funny,

✓ When I was a child, I used to enjoy watching advertisements because they made me laugh,

Keep past tense 'used to' for a past habit. 'Made me funny' is incorrect — to indicate amusement use 'made me laugh' or 'amused me'.

× but now umm, they are a little bit boring and I don't prefer watch them when I'm uh, watching some social medias because they are distract me.

✓ but now they are a little boring and I don't prefer to watch them when I'm watching social media because they distract me.

Use 'prefer to watch' (verb + to-infinitive). 'Social medias' is incorrect; use 'social media' (uncountable). 'They are distract me' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'they distract me'. Also remove filler words for clarity.

× I, uh, prefer watching advertisements of some candies or chocolates because they are interesting and funny and they gave me some, umm, good expressions.

✓ I prefer watching advertisements for candies or chocolates because they are interesting and funny and they give me pleasant feelings.

Use present simple 'prefer' to match the current preference. Use 'advertisements for' not 'of'. 'They gave me' should be present 'they give me' to match present-tense preference. 'Good expressions' is unnatural; 'pleasant feelings' or 'good impressions' is clearer.