Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence naming the ad, give specific details (what product, what happened), use linking words, avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Keep to 3–4 concise sentences. Pay attention to correct word choice (e.g. "gum ad" not "gun slow gun") and grammar.

Ejemplo: A gum advertisement for a brand called "FreshSpin" impressed me when I was a child. The commercial showed adults happily chewing the gum while spinning around in a bright park, which made the ad feel joyful and memorable. Because the images were lively and the jingle was catchy, I remembered the brand for a long time.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and then add specific examples with linking words. Avoid repetition ("new web new apps"), choose precise vocabulary ("on buses and trains", "posters", "digital screens"), and limit to 3–4 sentences. Use connecting words like "for example" or "often" to organize ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see a lot of advertising on trains and buses. For example, there are poster ads for new movies and digital screens promoting mobile apps. I find many of them useful because they announce events and products I might try.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then contrast situations with linking words (e.g. "however", "for example"). Be specific about what makes ads acceptable or annoying and avoid vague phrasing. Keep it concise and finish the sentence. Correct word choices ("while commuting" not "take a list").

Ejemplo: I like advertisements only when they are not disruptive. For example, while I am commuting I enjoy reading small ads on my phone because they pass the time; however, I dislike long ads that interrupt a movie or TV show because they break the flow.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence naming the types you prefer, then provide specific reasons and an example. Use linking words like "especially" and "because" and avoid repetitions ("for some for some", "a new like a new"). Keep sentences well formed and limited to 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer interesting and creative advertisements, especially for new digital products. For example, a short animated video about a new app can quickly explain its features while I am commuting, so I can decide whether to download it.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give clear supporting reasons with linking words. Correct grammar and repetition ("using my using my"). Be specific about the activities that reduce time for ads (messaging, work, reading) and use 2–3 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: Not often, because I mainly use my phone and computer for tasks. For example, I spend most of my time messaging friends, doing work, or reading articles, so I usually ignore or block online advertisements.

× a gun slow gun advertisement made a strong pressure on me.

✓ a Gun Slow gun advertisement made a strong impression on me.

The noun 'pressure' is incorrect here; 'impression' is the correct noun collocating with 'made a strong'. Also 'advertisement' is singular and is used correctly; ensure proper capitalization of the brand name if intended. Use 'impression' to express an effect on feelings.

× The advertisement was showing some happy adults chewing their gums and they felt very happy spinning spin spin and spin all the day.

✓ The advertisement showed happy adults chewing gum and feeling very happy as they spun around all day.

Use 'showed' (past tense) instead of 'was showing' for a simple description; 'chewing gum' is the correct phrase (uncountable noun), not 'chewing their gums'. Repeated 'spin' is informal; 'spun around' or 'spinning' works. 'All the day' should be 'all day'. Ensure verb forms and noun forms are correct.

× It was very interesting. It was very

✓ It was very interesting.

The sentence fragment 'It was very' is incomplete. Remove the fragment or complete it with an adjective. Keep sentences complete with subject and predicate.

× Yes, there are always some advertisements on trips and buses.

✓ Yes, there are always advertisements on trains and buses.

Use the correct transport word 'trains' rather than 'trips'. 'Some advertisements' is acceptable but 'advertisements' is more natural. 'There are' is correctly used to indicate existence.

× Most of them are pictures shown showing new web new apps on or movies or new movies I think they are useful and many of them are interesting and impressive.

✓ Most of them are pictures showing new apps or movies. I think they are useful, and many of them are interesting and impressive.

Remove redundant words ('shown showing', 'new' repeated). 'Web apps' can be 'apps' or 'web apps' but keep consistent. Separate run-on ideas into two sentences. Use commas to join related clauses.

× I like advertisements when they are not disturbing me.

✓ I like advertisements when they do not disturb me.

Using 'do not disturb' is more natural than 'are not disturbing' for a general preference. 'They' correctly refers to advertisements.

× For example, when I take a list, there are some advertisements in the list I can read and they can kill the boring time but if I'm watching a movie or a TV opera or a TV opera the advertisement is disturbing me and

✓ For example, when I read a magazine, there are advertisements I can read, and they help pass the time. But if I'm watching a movie or a TV soap opera, the advertisements disturb me.

'Take a list' is incorrect; likely 'read a magazine' fits context. 'Kill the boring time' should be 'help pass the time'. Remove repetition 'TV opera'. Complete the contrasting sentence; avoid run-on sentences by splitting into two. Use present simple for general preferences.

× I like advertisement which are interesting or creative especially for some for some new products like a new like a new digital projects I can catch the information quickly while I'm on commuting

✓ I like advertisements that are interesting or creative, especially for new products like digital gadgets; I can get the information quickly while commuting.

Use plural 'advertisements'. Use 'that' for defining relative clauses. Remove repetition 'for some for some' and 'like a new like a new'. 'Digital projects' is unclear; 'digital gadgets' or 'products' is better. 'I can catch the information' should be 'I can get the information'. 'While I'm on commuting' should be 'while commuting' or 'while I am commuting'.

× I don't see as I'm on my phone or computer because I have a lot of things to do using my using my digital device for example I'm a message I communicate with my friends.

✓ I don't see many when I'm on my phone or computer because I have a lot to do on my digital devices. For example, I message and communicate with my friends.

Use 'don't see many' (advertisements) rather than 'don't see'. Remove duplicate 'using my'. 'I'm a message' is incorrect; use 'I message' or 'I send messages'. Keep verb forms simple present for habitual actions.

× I finish my work on computer on my computer and all I CI read many articles

✓ I finish my work on my computer and I also read many articles.

Use 'finish' and 'read' in simple present for habitual actions. Remove repeated 'on computer'. 'CI' appears to be a typo; replace with 'also'. Ensure conjunction 'and' connects two parallel clauses correctly.