Part 1
Examinador
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
Candidato
There's no Beijing advertisement and let me an impression when I was a child.
Examinador
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
Candidato
Yes, when I goes out by plane, I always see the advertisements on the seats and there's lots of advertisement on the way to work.
Examinador
Do you like advertisements?
Candidato
No, I don't like it because there's so many advertisements when I'm watching TV and there's need a VIP when I watch TV on the app.
Examinador
What kind of advertising do you like?
Candidato
I don't like any advertising.
Examinador
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
Candidato
Yes, I always see it so I dislike it.
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 回答不够清晰且语法错误较多。建议先直接回答问题(有或没有、什么广告),然后用1-2句简短具体说明为什么印象深刻。注意主谓一致、时态和词序,避免无意义词语。示例结构:主题句 + 具体细节(哪里看到、广告内容、为什么记得)。
Ejemplo: I remember a TV advertisement for a children’s toy when I was small. It showed bright colors and a catchy song, and I wanted the toy because the ad made it look fun and friendly.
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答比较直接,但有语法错误与重复。建议先用一句话概括频率和位置,然后用一两个具体例子支持。注意主谓一致(goes → go)、可数/不可数(advertisements)。使用连接词如 "for example" 或 "also" 来衔接细节。
Ejemplo: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on public transport. For example, there are posters on the subway and ads on airplane seatbacks, and I also notice billboards on my way to work.
Do you like advertisements?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 观点明确但表达混乱且有语法问题。建议先给出直接回答,然后用一两句具体原因,用连接词(because, so)。修正语法(there's → there are;need a VIP → I need a VIP subscription to remove them)。避免冗长重复。
Ejemplo: No, I don't like advertisements because there are too many of them on TV. For instance, streaming apps often require a VIP subscription to remove ads, which is annoying.
What kind of advertising do you like?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答简短但过于绝对且缺乏拓展。建议先直接回答,然后补充1-2句说明原因或例外(如果有某类广告你认为可以接受),使用连接词如 "however" 或 "but" 来丰富回答。
Ejemplo: Actually, I don't like most advertisements because they interrupt programs. However, I don't mind short, informative ads about public services or events that are useful.
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答简洁但过于简单。建议先直接回答频率,然后说明具体场景和影响,使用连接词(so, because)并给出例子(pop-ups, banners)。注意代词一致(it → them)。
Ejemplo: Yes, I see many ads on my phone and computer, especially pop-ups and banner ads on websites. Because they are distracting, I usually install an ad blocker to avoid them.
× There's no Beijing advertisement and let me an impression when I was a child.
✓ There wasn't any Beijing advertisement that left an impression on me when I was a child.
原句结构混乱:使用了“There's no”与过去时间“when I was a child”不一致,而且“let me an impression”是错误的表达。应使用过去时态“wasn't”并用被动或过去分词短语“left an impression on me”来表示“给我留下印象”。建议把时态与时间状语保持一致,主语与谓语搭配正确。
× Yes, when I goes out by plane, I always see the advertisements on the seats and there's lots of advertisement on the way to work.
✓ Yes, when I go out by plane, I always see advertisements on the seats and there are lots of advertisements on the way to work.
原句中“goes”与主语“I”不一致,应为“go”。另外“there's lots of advertisement”中“there's”缩写表示“there is”,与后面的复数名词不一致,应改为“there are”,并且使用复数“advertisements”。注意主谓一致和可数名词的单复数。
× No, I don't like it because there's so many advertisements when I'm watching TV and there's need a VIP when I watch TV on the app.
✓ No, I don't like them because there are so many advertisements when I'm watching TV, and you need a VIP subscription to watch TV on the app.
原句中代词“it”指代不清,广告为复数应使用“them”。“there's so many”存在主谓不一致,应为“there are so many”。“there's need a VIP”表达不自然且错误,应改为“you need a VIP subscription”或“it requires a VIP subscription”。建议注意代词的单数/复数指代并用正确的句型表达‘需要……’。
× I don't like any advertising.
✓ I don't like any advertisements.
“any advertising”虽能表达大意,但与上下文其他句子一致以及自然英语中更常用复数可数形式“advertisements”。建议在谈论可数的多则用复数名词。
× Yes, I always see it so I dislike it.
✓ Yes, I always see them, so I dislike them.
原句中代词“it”用于指代复数“advertisements”,应使用复数代词“them”。保持代词与先行词的人称和数一致,句子更清晰。