Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 答题不够连贯，句子结构和时态错误较多，信息重复且细节不具体。建议先用一句明确的主题句回答问题（是否有印象深刻的广告），然后用一到两句具体细节支持（例如广告类型、场景、为何印象深刻），注意时态一致和简洁表达，使用连接词提高连贯性。

Ejemplo: Yes. I remember a toy commercial on a large screen in the shopping mall when I was a child. It featured a famous actor and colorful animation, which made the toy look very exciting. Because of the catchy music and the actor, I really wanted to buy that toy.

Sugerencia: 内容较丰富但表达混乱，词序和名词短语使用不准确。建议先给出直接回答（是/否），然后用1–2个具体例子描述常见广告类型和位置，使用连接词（for example, also）并注意名词单复数和修饰语位置。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see adverts on buses and trains. For example, there are large posters on the sides of buses and small screens inside trains showing cute toy ads and food commercials. These snack ads often attract me because they look appealing.

Sugerencia: 回答含糊且语法错误多，观点表达重复。建议先明确表态（Yes/No/Sometimes），然后给出具体原因并用对比说明喜欢与不喜欢的情况，使用清晰的连接词（for instance, however）。注意人称短语和词序。

Ejemplo: Sometimes I do. For instance, if a famous person I admire appears in an advert, I am more likely to buy the product because I trust their choice. However, if the advert uses a celebrity I don't like or seems dishonest, I tend to avoid the product.

Sugerencia: 回答包含偏好但表达零散且细节不够具体。建议先总结喜欢的广告类型（toys, food），然后分别给出一两句具体原因或场景，使用连词（because, also）并避免冗长重复。

Ejemplo: I prefer adverts for toys and snacks. Toy ads appeal to me because they show the product's cute design and features, while snack ads attract me with mouth-watering images and scenes of people enjoying them during movies or tea time.

Sugerencia: 回答直接且观点明确，但句子重复、语法和表达不够精炼。建议先回答频率（Yes, often），然后具体说明在哪些情境看到广告并给出原因说明不喜欢，使用更自然的表达和简洁句子。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see adverts on my phone and computer, especially before online videos. I don't like them because many are too long and interrupt the show, which wastes my time.

× Yeah, actually there have most of the advertisement like some of the big screen there in the shopping mall.

✓ Yeah, actually there were/are many advertisements, like big screens in the shopping mall.

原句句子结构混乱，使用了不正确的动词结构“there have”且名词单复数不一致。应使用“There is/are”表达“有……”，并将“advertisement”改为复数“advertisements”。如果指过去用“were”，指现在用“are”。建议牢记固定结构“there is/there are”。（问题类型：句子结构错误）

× And also we can see that like some of about the famous person who in there that can make most of the person who like to buy it, like I like to buy the toys when I was a child.

✓ We could also see famous people in them who made many people want to buy the products; for example, I liked to buy the toys when I was a child.

原句中代词和从句使用不当，“some of about the famous person who in there”不符合英语表达，应使用“famous people in them”。“make most of the person who like to buy it”应改为“made many people want to buy the products”。同时保持时态一致，描述过去经历时用过去式。建议理清主从句，代词指代明确。

× Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?

✓ Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?

该句本身语法上可以接受，但若要更自然可将“transport”改为“forms of transport”或“public transport”。无重大语法错误，保持不变。

× Yeah, I also see that in the box like some about the bus, there is out of the bus, there have a screen and a picture or a post paper, there have something like the toys it's so cute and also some about the family and there have the food or some snacks that is very attracts me to buy it.

✓ Yes, I also see ads on buses. On the outside of the bus there are screens, posters, and pictures showing cute toys, family products, or snacks that attract me to buy them.

原句过度冗长且结构混乱，使用了错误的短语（如“in the box”，“there is out of the bus”）和不正确的主谓一致（“there have”）。应拆分为几个短语并用正确的“There are”结构，名词复数和代词保持一致（ads, them）。建议简化句子，按信息块分句。

× I think some of the time I would like advertisement like my famous, I like a famous person who in the advertisement that I will buy it and I think it's very great.

✓ I think sometimes I like advertisements with famous people; if a famous person is in an advertisement, I will buy the product and think it's great.

原句时态和词序混乱，“some of the time”应为“sometimes”，“I would like advertisement like my famous”不通顺，应改为“I like advertisements with famous people”。条件关系用现在时更自然（if a famous person is in an advertisement）。建议使用简洁的副词和正确的条件句结构。

× But some about the advertisements like I don't like the person who win the advertisement, I will not buy it and I don't like it.

✓ But for some advertisements, if I don't like the person in the ad, I will not buy the product and I won't like it.

原句代词“who win the advertisement”错误，且动词“win”不合适，应为“the person in the ad”。保持条件句并使用将来或一般现在时更清晰。建议将“it”明确为“the product”或“the ad”。

× I like some about the toys, it's very cute and I really like it because it's so soft and comfortable and also I am a foodie.

✓ I like toys; they are very cute and I really like them because they are soft and comfortable. Also, I am a foodie.

原句“some about the toys”和代词单复数不一致（it vs toys）。应使用复数代词“they/them”并把想法分成两个句子以增强清晰度。量词“some”可省或具体化。建议注意名词和代词的一致性。

× Also some about the snack, I also like it very much because I always eat tea in the night that I also see the movie.

✓ I also like snacks very much because I often eat them at night while watching movies.

原句结构不正确且短语“eat tea”是中式英语，应为“eat snacks”或“have tea”。“in the night that I also see the movie”需要改为“at night while watching movies”。建议使用常见搭配和连词表示同时发生的动作。

× Yeah, I always see the advertisements, like some of the time when I see the movie that's in the computer that's have more advertisements.

✓ Yes, I always see advertisements. For example, when I watch movies on my computer, there are many advertisements.

原句时态和从句结构不自然，“see the movie that's in the computer”应为“watch movies on my computer”。“that's have”错误，应为“there are”。建议用更自然的动词搭配（watch on the computer）。

× I don't like it because it's really long and really waste my time.

✓ I don't like them because they are really long and really waste my time.

原句代词与先行词不一致（it指ads应为they），动词“waste”在句中需与主语一致（they waste）。将形容词和动词形式配搭正确。建议确保代词与所指名词一致并用正确的主谓结构。

× I don't like it very much. I just want to see that it's a show.

✓ I don't like them very much. I just want to watch the show.

“see that it's a show”是直译式错误，应使用“watch the show”；同样“it”应该替换为“them”指广告。建议使用更地道的动词搭配并保持代词一致。