Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Ответ понятен, но есть повтор («so so that»), некоторые грамматические ошибки и не хватает конкретики о том, почему реклама запомнилась. Совет: упростите фразы, уберите повторения, используйте связку и добавьте конкретную деталь (например, что именно в рекламе привлекло внимание). Также следите за порядком слов и временами.

Ejemplo: I didn't watch much television as a child, so I didn't see many advertisements. However, I remember a McDonald's ad that impressed me because of its catchy song and colorful characters, which made me want to visit the restaurant.

Sugerencia: Ответ ясен, но есть тавтология («advertisement advertising») и некоторая неуверенность («I can't say anything about trains»). Совет: отвечайте прямо, избегайте повторов, используйте связующие слова для плавного перехода и дайте пример, где именно видите рекламу.

Ejemplo: I often notice adverts on public transport, especially on buses and in the metro. For example, bus sides frequently display posters for local events, and inside the metro there are digital screens showing ads for phones and food.

Sugerencia: Ответ выражает мнение, но содержит повтор («disturb disturb»), эмоционально негативную формулировку и сложную фразу про «addicted to unnecessary purchasing». Совет: выразите позицию короче, объясните причину конкретно и используйте естественные выражения для зависимости от покупок.

Ejemplo: It depends on the ad, but generally I dislike commercials because they interrupt what I'm doing and often encourage me to buy things I don't need. For instance, a short pop-up ad can make me click and later regret the purchase.

Sugerencia: Хорошая структура и ясная идея, но есть грамматическая ошибка («works» вместо «work») и некоторая громоздкость. Совет: используйте правильную форму глагола, дайте конкретный пример типа рекламы и поясните, почему она эффективна.

Ejemplo: I prefer short, humorous ads because they keep my attention and are easy to remember. For example, a 30-second humorous clip for a snack brand made me laugh and remember the product long after seeing it.

Sugerencia: Ответ естественный, но есть некорректные фразы («spend online many hours», «crawling the net») и немного многословия. Совет: используйте более естественные выражения для активности в интернете, сократите ответ до 2–3 предложений и приведите пример типа рекламы, которая раздражает или нравится.

Ejemplo: Yes, I see many ads online because I spend several hours a day on my phone browsing social media and websites. Some ads, like autoplay videos, are very irritating, while funny sponsored posts sometimes catch my attention.

× Well, honestly, when I was a child, I didn't have a mobile phone and I didn't watch TV so so that I didn't see any advertisements.

✓ Well, honestly, when I was a child, I didn't have a mobile phone and I didn't watch TV, so I didn't see any advertisements.

The sentence contains an unnecessary repetition 'so so that' which disrupts past-tense coherence. Remove the extra words and use a comma before 'so' to join the clauses. Suggestion: write concise connectors to keep past-tense statements clear.

× But I think I saw one about the McDonald's and I was keen on it.

✓ But I think I saw one about McDonald's and I was keen on it.

Use of the definite article 'the' before brand names like McDonald's is usually unnecessary. Also 'McDonald's' is a proper noun representing the restaurant/brand and does not need 'the'. Suggestion: omit 'the' before brand names.

× Actually, I can't say anything about trains, but I see a lot of commercials on other public transport such as metro, buses and even trams.

✓ Actually, I can't say much about trains, but I see a lot of commercials on other public transport such as the metro, buses and even trams.

'Say anything about' is awkward in this context; 'say much about' fits better. Also include 'the' before 'metro' when referring to a specific system. Maintain parallel structure when listing items.

× So nowadays there is a tendency of making advertisement advertising on transport.

✓ So nowadays there is a tendency to place advertisements on transport.

The phrase 'tendency of making' is unidiomatic; use 'tendency to' + verb. 'Advertisement advertising' is repetitive and incorrect; use the plural 'advertisements'. Suggestion: use 'tendency to place advertisements' for clarity.

× Well, I can say that it depends on the kind of ads, but honestly I hate commercials because they usually disturb disturb me and I'm addicted to unnecessary purchasing so they make me do it on a regular basis.

✓ Well, I can say that it depends on the kind of ads, but honestly I dislike commercials because they usually disturb me and make me want to buy unnecessary things regularly.

Repeated word 'disturb disturb' is an error. 'Hate' is strong; 'dislike' is more natural but optional. 'I'm addicted to unnecessary purchasing' is awkward; use 'make me want to buy unnecessary things' or 'lead me to make unnecessary purchases'. Also simplify 'on a regular basis' to 'regularly'.

× Well, I enjoy short and fun advertisements because I find them interesting and I think that these kinds really works because people pay attention to those more.

✓ Well, I enjoy short and fun advertisements because I find them interesting and I think that these kinds really work because people pay more attention to them.

Subject-verb agreement: 'kinds' is plural so verb should be 'work' not 'works'. 'Pay attention to those more' is awkward; use 'pay more attention to them' for natural word order.

× Honestly yes, because I spend online many hours a day chatting with my friends or just crawling the net, so I see a lot of different kinds of advertisements and sometimes they are irritating but sometimes I find them really interesting and funny.

✓ Honestly, yes, because I spend many hours a day online chatting with my friends or just browsing the net, so I see a lot of different kinds of advertisements; sometimes they are irritating but sometimes I find them really interesting and funny.

Word order: 'spend online many hours a day' should be 'spend many hours a day online'. 'Crawling the net' is incorrect idiom; use 'browsing the net'. Use punctuation to separate clauses for clarity. Present tense usage is fine but word choice and order needed correction.