Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, correct grammar, and add a brief specific detail. Use linking words if adding a reason or example.

Ejemplo: I don't remember a single ad clearly, but I often saw sweets and other food advertisements when I was a child. For example, there was a colorful chocolate commercial on TV that used a catchy jingle, and I remember wanting to try the product because of it.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear statement, correct vocabulary (advertisements), and avoid repetition. Give one specific example and a concise reason using linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I see many advertisements on trains and buses. For instance, there are full-panel posters promoting phones and travel agencies, and I find them distracting because they clutter the space and make the journey less relaxing.

Sugerencia: Respond directly and use correct grammar (Advertisements are). Avoid hesitations and give a specific reason with a linking word (because).

Ejemplo: No, I don't like many advertisements because they can be manipulative. For example, some ads create unrealistic expectations about beauty or happiness, which I think is harmful to people's self-esteem.

Sugerencia: Begin with a topic sentence naming the types you prefer, use correct words (advertising), and explain briefly why with a specific detail. Keep it concise and natural.

Ejemplo: I particularly like food and technology advertising because they often show product features and creative ideas. For example, a tech ad that demonstrates a phone's camera capabilities helps me understand its benefits, while a food ad that shows cooking scenes makes the product appealing.

Sugerencia: Answer clearly, correct verb choice (see), and give a specific example of how ads appear online. Use linking words and avoid repetition; correct grammar (Advertisements are).

Ejemplo: Yes, I see many ads when I watch YouTube or browse websites. For example, pre-roll video ads interrupt the content and often repeat the same message, which I find boring and annoying because they break the flow of what I'm watching.

× No, I don't remember exactly, but when I was child I often saw uh, sweets and food advertisements especially I like so food.

✓ No, I don't remember exactly, but when I was a child I often saw sweets and food advertisements, especially; I liked food-related ads.

Missing article before 'child' and awkward sentence structure. Use 'a child' for singular countable noun. Tense consistency: talking about past childhood so use past tense 'liked'. Break into clearer clauses and remove filler words. Suggestion: add article, use past tense, and reorder for clarity.

× Yes, I say a lot of adversity when I get on trains and the other transport especially I often say by bus and by plane.

✓ Yes, I see a lot of advertising on trains and other transport, especially when I travel by bus or by plane.

Wrong verb 'say' should be 'see'. 'Adversity' is incorrect word; use 'advertising' or 'ads'. Use preposition 'on' with 'trains' and 'other transport'. Use 'when I travel by' to indicate transport mode. Suggestion: replace verbs and nouns with correct forms and use appropriate prepositions.

× There are many adverse different adversity. I don't like this adversity because they.

✓ There are many different advertisements. I don't like these ads because they are intrusive.

Misuse of 'adverse' and 'adversity' (wrong words). Use 'different advertisements' or 'different ads'. Pronoun agreement: 'ads' plural requires 'these' and complete clause 'because they are...'. Suggestion: choose correct noun 'advertisements', match pronouns and complete the idea.

× No, in my opinion, uh, advertisements is dangerous to psychology.

✓ No, in my opinion, advertisements are harmful to people's psychology.

Subject 'advertisements' is plural so verb must be 'are' not 'is'. Also 'dangerous to psychology' is awkward; 'harmful to people's psychology' or 'harmful to mental health' is clearer. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use natural collocations.

× Other people, uh, uh, they, uh, sometimes I can't watch it.

✓ Sometimes I can't watch them because other people influence me.

Sentence fragments and unclear pronoun reference. 'It' doesn't refer properly to 'advertisements' (plural). Rephrase to a complete sentence, use 'them' for plural and clarify reason. Suggestion: make one complete clause and use correct pronoun number.

× I, I hate to say.

✓ I hate to say that.

Incomplete sentence; missing object or complement. Add 'that' to indicate what is hated to say, or complete the thought. Suggestion: finish the sentence to convey meaning.

× Especially I like food and technology adversity.

✓ I especially like food and technology advertisements.

Wrong word 'adversity' should be 'advertisements'. Adverb placement: 'especially' is better before the verb or phrase. Suggestion: replace incorrect noun and place adverb in natural position.

× This is really interesting and amazing In my opinion.

✓ In my opinion, these advertisements are really interesting and amazing.

Capitalization and sentence flow issues; refer back to plural 'advertisements' and place 'in my opinion' at start for clarity. Suggestion: ensure subject matches and punctuation is correct.

× There are many valuable time and valuable hard working, so we have to appreciate it.

✓ They show a lot of valuable time and hard work, so we should appreciate them.

'Valuable time' and 'valuable hard working' are ungrammatical. Use 'a lot of' or 'much' and 'hard work' (noun). Pronoun agreement: refer to plural 'they'/'them'. Suggestion: use correct nouns and match plurality.

× Yes, when I watch YouTube I always say advertisements.

✓ Yes, when I watch YouTube I always see advertisements.

Verb 'say' is incorrect; use 'see' for viewing ads. Preposition use is fine otherwise. Suggestion: use correct verb collocation 'see ads'.

× I don't like it because they. Really boring and unclear.

✓ I don't like them because they are really boring and unclear.

Sentence fragments and pronoun mismatch: 'it' vs plural 'they'. Combine fragments into one complete sentence and include the verb 'are'. Suggestion: ensure pronoun number matches and avoid sentence fragments.

× Advertisements is really bad thing.

✓ Advertisements are a really bad thing.

Plural subject 'Advertisements' requires plural verb 'are'. Also need an article before 'really bad thing' => 'a'. Suggestion: check subject-verb agreement and use articles for singular countable nouns.