Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and accurate: begin with a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary (Boost not ‘boast’), and give one or two specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep to 2–4 sentences. Pronounciation and grammar need polishing (e.g., ‘used to appear on TV’, ‘I watched it often’).

Ejemplo: I remember a Boost energy drink commercial from my childhood; its slogan, “Boost is the secret of my energy,” really stuck with me. I watched that advert whenever it appeared on TV because the music and slogan were catchy and memorable.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct topic sentence and reduce repetition (e.g., ‘trains, buses and metros’ is fine once). Clarify the government’s role carefully (usually transport authorities sell ad space). Use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘so’ to connect reason and result. Keep sentences shorter and more natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on trains, buses and metro stations. These ads are usually sold by transport authorities to raise revenue, and because of them people learn about new products and services, so I find them useful.

Sugerencia: Avoid formal address like ‘Sir’ in this context. Give a clear topic sentence and one specific supporting detail. Fix grammar (e.g., ‘what details we require’ → ‘the information we need’) and simplify: one example is enough and should be succinctly explained.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. Advertisements help me learn key information about products and services, such as price and contact details. For example, I found and bought my apartment after seeing a detailed newspaper advertisement.

Sugerencia: Answer with a clear topic sentence and complete your thought—avoid trailing off. Use specific vocabulary (‘technology ads’ or ‘gadget ads’) and give one concrete reason why you pay attention. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and finish the example properly.

Ejemplo: I prefer technology and gadget advertisements because I enjoy learning about new features. For example, when Apple releases a new iPhone ad, I watch carefully to learn about camera improvements and battery life.

Sugerencia: Answer directly about mobile/computer ads rather than TV. Correct phrasing (‘I see a lot of ads on my phone and computer’). Be specific about platforms and ad types (pre-roll, banner). Use linking words to show contrast or reason and avoid incorrect statements (many platforms allow skipping).

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see ads on my phone and computer, especially pre-roll ads on YouTube and banner ads on websites. For instance, some streaming services show unskippable ads during videos unless you pay for a subscription.

× I like the Boost commercial which comes in TV.

✓ I like the Boost commercial that appears on TV.

Use 'appears on TV' rather than 'comes in TV'. 'Comes' + 'in' is incorrect collocation; 'appears on' or 'is shown on' is appropriate for broadcasts. Also use 'that' or 'which' for defining clauses; 'that' is more natural here.

× When I was a child, it was actually an energy drink.

✓ When I was a child, it was actually an energy drink advertisement.

The sentence is grammatically possible but semantically unclear: 'it' could refer to the product or the commercial. Clarify by specifying 'energy drink advertisement'. No tense change needed.

× I love the phrase they used to say boast is the secret of my energy to see that phrase itself.

✓ I love the phrase they used to say: 'Boost is the secret of my energy.' I like that phrase itself.

The original mixes clauses and misuses 'boast' vs 'Boost' and lacks punctuation. Use quotation marks (here single quotes inside JSON not allowed, but corrected sentence includes them) and separate the comment 'I like that phrase itself.' Also 'Boost' is a proper noun.

× I watch that advertisement whenever it comes in TV.

✓ I used to watch that advertisement whenever it was on TV.

For habitual actions in the past, use 'used to' or past simple. 'Comes in TV' is incorrect; use 'is on TV' or 'was on TV' for past. 'Whenever' with past habit: 'used to' or 'would'.

× Yes, I see lot of advertisements on trains, buses and as well as metros.

✓ Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on trains, buses and metros.

Missing article 'a' before 'lot'. 'and as well as' is redundant; use 'and' or 'as well as', not both.

× The government itself is actually promoting these advertisements to earn additional revenue.

✓ The government is actually promoting these advertisements to earn additional revenue.

Adding 'itself' is unnecessary and awkward here. Removing it makes the sentence natural.

× In turn, people also get to know what kind of products are getting launched through these commercials.

✓ In turn, people learn about the kinds of products being launched through these commercials.

'Get to know' is informal; 'learn about' is clearer. Use 'kinds of products' and 'being launched' for passive progressive.

× Yes Sir, I like the advertisements because they are very crucial to understand what exactly the product is or what whatever details we required is given through these channels.

✓ Yes, Sir. I like advertisements because they are crucial for understanding exactly what the product is and because the required details are provided through these channels.

Multiple issues: punctuation after 'Sir', 'crucial to understand' should be 'crucial for understanding'. 'what whatever details we required is given' is ungrammatical; change to 'the required details are provided' and match subject-verb agreement.

× For example, I purchased my own flat after seeing the advertisement on newspaper.

✓ For example, I purchased my own flat after seeing the advertisement in the newspaper.

Use 'in the newspaper' not 'on newspaper'. 'Purchased' is fine for past action.

× I personally love gadgets, so any advertisements which are related to technologies or gadgets like smartphones or televisions, I pay extra attention to watch them.

✓ I personally love gadgets, so I pay extra attention to advertisements related to technology or gadgets, such as smartphones or televisions.

Sentence order and wording improved: 'technologies' should be 'technology'; 'pay extra attention to watch them' is awkward—use 'pay extra attention to advertisements'.

× For example, whenever Apple comes up with a new product and they launch their advertisement on TV, I watch it with more attention because I.

✓ For example, whenever Apple comes up with a new product and launches its advertisement on TV, I watch it more attentively because I am interested in new gadgets.

Original sentence is incomplete ('because I.'). Make subject-verb agreement consistent ('Apple ... launches its advertisement') and complete the reason. Use 'more attentively' instead of 'with more attention'.

× Yes, I see lot of advertisements on TV's and computers.

✓ Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on TVs and computers.

Use 'a lot of' with noun. Do not use apostrophe in plural 'TVs'. 'on TVs and computers' is clearer.

× Whenever I watch videos like streaming platforms like YouTube, there are no options to skip those commercials as well.

✓ On some streaming platforms like YouTube, there are no options to skip certain commercials.

Redundant 'like' and awkward word order. Clarify by specifying 'on some streaming platforms' and 'certain commercials'.

× For example, when you subscribe for Amazon, you cannot skip the videos and you have to watch it in between.

✓ For example, when you subscribe to Amazon, you cannot skip the ads and you have to watch them in between.

Use 'subscribe to' not 'subscribe for'. 'Videos' should be 'ads' (commercials) and match plural pronoun 'them'. 'in between' is acceptable but 'in between videos' could be added; simplified to 'in between'.