Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence naming the ad, then give one or two specific reasons why it impressed you using linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., "a memorable ad for Vietnam Milk," "catchy melody," "cartoon characters").

Ejemplo: A memorable advertisement for Vietnam Milk impressed me when I was a child. Its catchy melody and colorful cartoon characters made it joyful to watch, so I would hum the tune and sing along every time it appeared on TV.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer then add one clear specific detail. Avoid filler words and unclear phrasing (e.g., 'stick in the bottom of the trains'). Use linking words such as 'for example' or 'for instance' to clarify where ads appear.

Ejemplo: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on public transport. For example, buses and trains often have colorful posters and ads on their sides and doors, which are eye-catching and easy for passengers to notice.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and then explain one or two criteria you use to judge ads. Remove hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., 'it depends on the content' and 'it definitely impresses me'). Use a linking word like 'because' to connect reason.

Ejemplo: It depends on the advertisement. I like ads that are creative or have catchy music because they are enjoyable and memorable.

Sugerencia: Clarify vocabulary and be specific: say 'TV commercials with professional cinematography' rather than unclear words. Give one supporting detail about why you prefer that style and use a linking word such as 'because' or 'for example.'

Ejemplo: I prefer TV commercials with professional cinematography because high-quality camera work and good editing make the story feel cinematic and more engaging for viewers.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear direct answer and one specific example of where you see ads and why you dislike them. Avoid unclear phrases ('campaigned in VIP') and reduce hesitations. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'so' appropriately.

Ejemplo: Yes, I see many ads on my phone when I browse social media. For example, short video ads on TikTok and sponsored posts on Facebook appear frequently and often repeat, which I find annoying.

× Yes, that's a worth a milk advertisement of Vietnam milk and this has a really catchy melodies and like cartoons characters that make me so happy whenever watching that advertisement.

✓ Yes, that's a Vietnam milk advertisement, and it has really catchy melodies and cartoon characters that make me very happy whenever I watch that advertisement.

Multiple issues: article and word order (Grammar problem type ID 22 Article errors and 18 Incorrect order of adjectives), singular/plural (ID 1 Singular and plural issue: 'melodies' can be plural but 'a really catchy melodies' is incorrect), incorrect noun form (use 'cartoon characters' not 'cartoons characters'), and verb form/tense (ID 6 Present tense issue: 'whenever watching' should be 'whenever I watch'). Suggestion: use correct article and noun order ('a Vietnam milk advertisement' or 'a Vietnamese milk advertisement'), match singular/plural ('catchy melodies' without 'a'), use correct noun phrase 'cartoon characters', and include subject with present tense verb 'I watch'.

× Yes, absolutely. Whenever I go on the street, I see a lot of advertisement that umm, stick in the bottom of the trains and the bus, which is really like catchy and easy to see. So I think that a really interesting advertisement.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Whenever I go onto the street, I see a lot of advertisements that stick to the bottoms of trains and buses; they are really catchy and easy to see. So I think they are really interesting advertisements.

Issues: singular/plural (ID 1): use 'advertisements' plural; prepositions (ID 11): 'stick to the bottom' not 'stick in the bottom'; article errors (ID 22): 'the bus' -> 'buses' or 'a bus'; subject-verb agreement (ID 27): 'advertisements that stick' matches plural; pronoun reference (ID 12): replace 'that' with 'they' or restructure. Suggestions: pluralize nouns for general statements, use 'stick to' with correct object form ('bottoms of trains and buses'), and keep pronouns consistent.

× Well, for me it's depends on the contents that that, uh, advertisement made. If it umm, catchy melodies, tunes or like with creative ways of advertising, I would say it's definitely impressed from for me.

✓ Well, for me it depends on the content of the advertisement. If it has catchy melodies or creative advertising methods, I would say it definitely impresses me.

Issues: verb agreement/tense (ID 27 Subject-verb agreement and ID 6 Present tense): 'it's depends' should be 'it depends'; noun choice/number (ID 1 and 22): 'contents' -> 'content'; incorrect clause structure (ID 26 Sentence structure errors): 'that that advertisement made' is unclear; verb + -ing/past participle misuse (ID 8/9): 'impressed from for me' is wrong, use active verb 'impresses me'. Suggestions: use 'it depends', prefer 'content', use 'has' to describe features, and use 'impresses me' for present simple feeling.

× I think it would be like a TVC with professional Cam caramel caramel which made the advertisement much more, uh, cinematic and catchy to people to customer.

✓ I think it would be a TV commercial with professional camera work and color grading, which makes the advertisement much more cinematic and catchy to viewers and customers.

Issues: word choice and repetition (ID 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs): 'Cam caramel caramel' is incorrect; noun form/article (ID 22): 'a TVC' -> 'a TV commercial' is clearer; tense/agreement (ID 6): 'which made' should be 'which makes' to match general truth; preposition/word choice (ID 11): 'to people to customer' should be 'to viewers and customers'. Suggestions: use correct terminology like 'camera work' and 'color grading' or 'professional camerawork', maintain present tense for general statements, and use appropriate audience nouns.

× Without a doubt, there's a lot of campaigned in VIP whenever I'm scrolling to some social platforms like Facebook or Tiktok, and sometimes uh, there's a lot of advertisement, uh, repeat, uh, really much often. So I don't like that.

✓ Without a doubt, there are a lot of campaigns in my feed whenever I'm scrolling through social platforms like Facebook or TikTok, and sometimes advertisements are repeated very often. So I don't like that.

Issues: verb 'there is/are' agreement (ID 3 There be issue): 'there's a lot of campaigned' incorrect; noun form (ID 1): 'campaigned' should be 'campaigns' or 'ads'; preposition (ID 11): 'in VIP' unclear, 'in my feed' or 'on VIP' incorrect; verb form and adverb placement (ID 20 Incorrect adverb placement): 'repeat really much often' -> 'repeated very often'. Suggestions: use 'there are' with plural nouns, use correct nouns 'campaigns' or 'advertisements', use 'scrolling through' for platforms, and place adverbs appropriately ('repeated very often').