Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答需要更直接并简洁地表达印象广告的具体内容、原因和感受。注意句子结构和用词（如“pressed”错误，应为“impressed”或“moved”），避免重复（两次“it”）。可用一到两句补充细节并用连接词衔接。

Ejemplo: A family-themed TV commercial impressed me when I was a child because it showed parents and children spending time together. It moved me as it highlighted small acts of caring, and I still remember the song and scenes clearly.

Sugerencia: 回答应更自然并修正发音拼写错误（如“dis”应为“these”）。先用主题句直接回答，再用一两句说明地点和形式，使用连接词使语意连贯。注意避免冗余（“on the subway on the subway station”）。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see many advertisements in subway stations and on buses. They are usually large posters or digital screens placed by the platforms, so almost every passenger can notice them.

Sugerencia: 需要先给出明确立场，然后用连接词列举具体原因与例子。修正语法错误（如“let me lose the game and but”）、简化表达，并尽量提供更具体的“meaningful”例子。

Ejemplo: I have mixed feelings about advertisements. For instance, in-game ads annoy me because they interrupt gameplay, but educational ads aimed at children can be meaningful because they teach safety or healthy habits.

Sugerencia: 回答比较清晰但可更自然流畅，避免机械重复（“make this food look very tasty and make me want to have a try”）。可以加一两句具体例子或说明原因并用连接词增强连贯性。

Ejemplo: I prefer food advertisements, especially short commercials that show cooking close-ups. They often use vivid visuals and upbeat music, which make the dishes look appetizing and encourage me to try them.

Sugerencia: 回答要更准确并修复语法（如“on my and computer”应为“on my phone and computer”）。可先给直接回答，再说明广告的类型和具体影响，避免绝对化用词如“useless”。

Ejemplo: Definitely — I see many ads on my phone and computer these days. Most are pop-ups or autoplay videos that interrupt what I'm doing and can be hard to close, which is quite frustrating.

× I still remember being pressed by an advertisement which is about family and it it was talking about the information of family and also express some love to the people.

✓ I still remember being moved by an advertisement about family; it talked about family life and expressed love for people.

句中原文用 "being pressed by an advertisement" 不符合语义，且动名词用法不当，应改为表示情感影响的 "being moved" 或直接用过去时描述广告的内容。另外句子冗长且重复（"it it"），需拆分并将动词形式统一为过去时（"talked", "expressed"）。建议用更自然的动词搭配并保持时态一致。

× I see a large number of advertisements when I wait for the subway on the subway station, and dis advertisement is often very large and everyone can see them.

✓ I see a large number of advertisements when I wait at the subway station, and these advertisements are often very large so everyone can see them.

应使用介词 "at" 搭配 "station"（在车站），而不是 "on the subway station"。另外单复数及指示代词有误（"dis advertisement"、"them"），需改为复数一致的 "these advertisements"。保持代词和名词的一致性。

× Sometimes yes but sometimes no. Like for example I don't like advertisements when I play games because it will disturb me and let me lose the game and but sometimes I think some of the advertisement is meaningful especially for the children and also the young people.

✓ Sometimes yes, but sometimes no. For example, I don't like advertisements when I play games because they disturb me and make me lose the game; but sometimes I think some advertisements are meaningful, especially for children and young people.

句中代词与先行词不一致（"it will disturb" 应为复数 "they disturb"），并且名词单复数错误（"some of the advertisement" 应为 "some advertisements"）。去掉冗余连词并将动词时态和主语一致，改用更自然的连贯表达。

× I like food advertisements, especially some commercial videos because they make this food look very tasty and make me want to have a try.

✓ I like food advertisements, especially commercial videos, because they make the food look very tasty and make me want to try it.

短语 "have a try" 在此处不够地道，英语中常用 "try it"。此外 "this food" 更自然改为 "the food" 以指代泛指的食物。动词短语选择要符合习惯用法。

× Definitely yes. And nowadays there are more and more advertisements on my and computer and they are often useless and sometimes they just waste your time and you can't even close them.

✓ Definitely yes. Nowadays there are more and more advertisements on my phone and computer; they are often useless and sometimes they just waste your time and you can't even close them.

原句中出现 "on my and computer"，缺少名词"phone"且代词与名词搭配错误，应改为 "on my phone and computer"。保持并列结构完整，标点可帮助分割句子使表达更清晰。