Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答应更直接、条理清晰并减少重复，使用1个主题句加1–2个具体细节，并用连接词衔接。例如说明广告是什么、为什么给你留下深刻印象（人物、情节或感觉）。注意时态和单复数，以及避免多余填充词如“uh”。

Ejemplo: A lollipop commercial impressed me when I was a child. It featured three famous singers around my age dancing and tasting the lollipops, and their happy reactions made the product seem fun and delicious.

Sugerencia: 回答需更简洁并组织好细节顺序，先给出直接回答，然后用2个具体位置举例，避免语法错误（e.g. 'I can see', 'I have seen'）和多余停顿。使用连接词如“for example”或“also”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I see a lot of advertising on public transport. For example, there are posters on the back of seats and stickers around the window frames, and sometimes there are full-panel ads on carriage walls.

Sugerencia: 回答应更清晰地表达原因并使用恰当词汇。先给出总体观点，再列出1–2个具体理由并用连接词（e.g. 'because', 'also'）。避免不准确或拼写错误的词（如 'circum'）。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like some advertisements because they use attractive actors who make the products appealing. Also, good ads can inform customers about new items and boost sales for companies.

Sugerencia: 回答要先给出明确类别词，然后说明原因并举例。避免不自然的表达（如 'my hobby is to enjoy their faces'），改用更自然的说法如 'I enjoy seeing'。将句子控制在3–4句内。

Ejemplo: I prefer cosmetic advertisements because they feature models demonstrating products, and I enjoy seeing how makeup looks on different people. For example, a foundation ad helps me judge its coverage and finish.

Sugerencia: 先直接回答频率，然后解释原因并给出具体影响。注意语法（例如 'a waste of my time', 'they make my efficiency decrease' → 'they reduce my productivity'）并用连接词如 'because' 和 'so'. 删去不必要重复。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see ads on my phone and computer, but they waste my time because I use devices for studying and work. As a result, these ads reduce my productivity and distract me from tasks.

× Yes. Uh, the advertisement that made an impression, uh, with me when I was a child is, uh, it's lollipops advertisement.

✓ Yes. The advertisement that made an impression on me when I was a child was for lollipops.

句子结构混乱并有多余词语（如多次使用 uh、it's）。正确表达应使用“made an impression on me”搭配受影响对象，且使用“was for lollipops”说明广告对象。建议去掉无意义填充词，按英语常用信息顺序组织句子。

× Uh, there are three celebrities at that time, but uh, they're just a singer and the ages is the same as me and they're dancing in the screen and they show the lollipops and smell and taste them.

✓ There were three celebrities at that time, but they were just singers and their ages were the same as mine. They were dancing on the screen and showing the lollipops, pretending to smell and taste them.

原句存在单复数错误（'a singer' 与 'three celebrities' 不一致）和代词所有格错误（'the ages is'）。另外时态应与过去情境一致，使用 were。'on the screen' 更常用，且需补充动词 'pretending' 或 'showing' 来表意更清楚。建议注意主语数量与名词、动词一致，使用正确的所有格（mine/ their）。

× Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport? Student: Yes, I do maybe, umm, at the, uh, behind the face of the chairs, uh, if I sit on the seat, I can see uh, an advertisement on the back of the chairs in front of the person or uh, on the frame of the window. And there are so many places I can saw the.

✓ Yes, I do. Maybe on the back of the seats: if I sit down I can see an advertisement on the back of the seat in front of me or on the window frame. I can see them in many places.

原句时态、用词和句子结构混杂。'sit on the seat' 更自然为 'sit down' 或 'sit on the seat'，但习惯表达为 'sit down'。'back of the chairs' 应为 'back of the seats'；'saw' 是过去式，不合情境，应为 'see' 或 'can see'。建议统一现在时，简化表达并用常见搭配（back of the seat, window frame）。

× Yes, I do because I can appreciate the faces about age actors or actress because they are very beautiful and attractive and I also think it's a very good way to advertise or show their products.

✓ Yes, because I can admire the faces of the actors and actresses of my age; they are very beautiful and attractive, and I also think advertising is a good way to promote products.

原句中 'appreciate the faces about age actors or actress' 结构和形容词用法错误，'about age' 应改为 'of my age' 或 'of similar age'；'actors or actress' 应为复数 'actors and actresses' 或统一性别形式。'show their products' 应用更自然的动词 'promote' 或 'advertise'。建议学习形容词短语如何修饰名词（of my age），以及名词复数的一致用法。

× It can motivate the circum of the economy.

✓ It can stimulate the economy.

'motivate the circum of the economy' 是不自然和错误的搭配。常用表达为 'stimulate the economy' 或 'boost the economy'。建议使用固定搭配表达经济增长相关意思。

× About some cosmetic because it will be let some actors or actresses to show their products and my hobby is to enjoy their faces or photos.

✓ I like cosmetic adverts because they often feature actors or actresses showing their products, and I enjoy looking at their faces or photos.

原句 'About some cosmetic' 用法不当，应直接说 'I like cosmetic adverts'。'let some actors or actresses to show' 中 'let' + to 不正确，且 'some' 量词使用混乱，改为 'often feature' 更自然。建议学习常用量词和固定搭配（feature, show, enjoy looking at）。

× So I think they are very attractive for me.

✓ So I think they are very attractive to me.

固定搭配是 'attractive to someone'，而非 'attractive for someone'。保持一般现在时描述偏好。建议记住常见介词搭配。

× I often see them, but I think it's a kind of way waste my time because I use phones or computers are for doing my homework or working and this advertisements will be make my efficiency dramatical decrease. So I think that's not very good.

✓ I often see them, but I think they are a kind of time-wasting because I use my phone or computer for doing homework or work, and these advertisements greatly decrease my efficiency. So I think that's not good.

原句结构混乱：'a kind of way waste my time' 不正确，应为 'a kind of time-wasting' 或 'a waste of time'。'I use phones or computers are for' 中有多余动词 'are'，且需加所有格 'my phone or computer'。'this advertisements' 主谓不一致，应为 'these advertisements'。'will be make my efficiency dramatical decrease' 语序和词形错误，改为 'greatly decrease my efficiency'。建议练习常见表达（a waste of time, decrease efficiency）并注意主谓一致、词序和形容词/副词形式。