Art— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Give a more direct and natural reason. “Yes, I do like drawing” is slightly repetitive, and “remember about my background in history” is unnatural. Use a clear linking phrase such as “because” and explain how drawing historical scenes helps you.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy drawing historical scenes because they help me remember important events and understand my cultural background. I also find drawing quite relaxing.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and avoid unclear phrases such as “Garry,” “go the encounter,” and “different whatever.” Use the correct conditional form “if I had the chance, I would go” and provide one specific reason, such as seeing paintings or learning about different cultures.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. I have not had the chance to visit an art gallery yet, but I would love to see original paintings and learn about different cultures. I think it would be an interesting and educational experience.

Sugerencia: Your main idea is understandable, but “at my age” may sound unnecessarily negative and the answer contains repetition of “I think.” State your opinion clearly, then explain that online videos could be a convenient way to learn despite your limited time.

Ejemplo: Not particularly, because I am quite busy at the moment and do not have much free time. However, I would be happy to watch short videos about art on YouTube, as they would allow me to learn something new without taking a formal course.

Sugerencia: Use the past tense consistently: “shaped our ability,” not “shapes our skills.” The final part is incomplete and unclear, so give a specific result of learning to draw, such as developing creativity or improving observation skills.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was in primary school, we often drew simple pictures such as trees, houses, and books. Those activities helped me develop my creativity and improve my ability to observe details.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more natural by saying “I am not particularly interested in art.” Avoid comparing art with “those kind of as such as history,” which is unclear. Give one concise reason for preferring science and use correct grammar, such as “science makes me more innovative.”

Ejemplo: I am not particularly interested in art because it has never been a major part of my life. I prefer science, as it encourages me to think creatively and discover how things work.

Sugerencia: Answer with a clear reason and avoid the confusing, highly technical ending. “I do not want to be an artist” is more appropriate than “I do not like to be an artist.” Explain your current career preference in one or two specific sentences, without using unexplained scientific terms.

Ejemplo: No, I do not. I am currently working as a scientist, and I enjoy conducting experiments related to diseases and medical development. I find scientific research more interesting and meaningful than creating art.

Sugerencia: Choose one option or clearly say that you like neither, then give a complete and relevant reason. The answer becomes unfinished and shifts into technical scientific details. Also avoid repetition such as “new experiments, new things” and “responds against respond.”

Ejemplo: I do not strongly prefer either type of art because I am not very interested in art. However, if I had to choose, I would choose modern art because it is more experimental and often presents unusual ideas.

× I feel like those pictures help me to remember about my background in history.

✓ I feel like those pictures help me remember my background in history.

The verb remember is transitive and is not normally followed by the preposition about. Say remember something, not remember about something.

× I didn't have a chance to go to Garry, but if I will have one, I'll do that.

✓ I didn't have a chance to go to Garry, but if I have one, I'll do that.

In a first conditional sentence, use the present simple after if and will in the main clause. The correct pattern is if + present simple, will + base verb.

× I think that is where you can see different history of various society.

✓ I think that is where you can see different histories of various societies.

History and society are countable nouns in this context, so they should be plural after different and various. Use histories and societies.

× So I feel like I go the encounter to different whatever.

✓ So I feel like I can encounter different things there.

The original sentence has an incorrect and incomplete structure. Use can encounter to express the possibility of meeting or experiencing different things, and use a clear noun such as things instead of whatever.

× I don't think so at my age I think I don't have that time for now,

✓ I don't think so. At my age, I don't think I have enough time for it right now.

The original contains two independent clauses joined without correct punctuation or a conjunction. Separating them into two sentences makes the structure clear.

× I don't think so at my age I think I don't have that time for now,

✓ I don't think so. At my age, I don't think I have enough time for it right now.

Use enough time to express a sufficient amount of time. That time is not appropriate in this context because no specific previously mentioned time has been identified.

× Actually yes, because I remember when I was in primary school we were drawing different pictures such as trees or books and that of course shapes our skills to think about complex things that, of course, help us to whatever.

✓ Actually, yes, because I remember that when I was in primary school, we drew different pictures, such as trees and books, and that, of course, shaped our ability to think about complex things and helped us develop our skills.

The answer describes past experiences, so the past forms shaped and helped are needed instead of the present forms shapes and help. Keep the verb tenses consistent with when I was in primary school.

× I really like science by the way because I think it's something which make me to be more innovative and to learn more new things rather than those kind of as such as history.

✓ I really like science, by the way, because I think it is something that makes me more innovative and helps me learn new things rather than subjects such as history.

The subject of makes is the singular noun something, so the verb must be makes, not make. In the present simple, a third-person singular subject takes a verb ending in -s.

× I really like science by the way because I think it's something which make me to be more innovative and to learn more new things rather than those kind of as such as history.

✓ I really like science, by the way, because I think it is something that makes me more innovative and helps me learn new things rather than subjects such as history.

The phrase those kind of as such as history is structurally incorrect. Use a clear comparison, such as rather than subjects such as history.

× I don't like to be an artist because nowadays I am a scientist of course I do experiments in about diseases and development so this is forever and for me because it helped me to build a knowledge about how Osprin developed from preparatorial lactation.

✓ I don't want to be an artist because I am a scientist nowadays. I conduct experiments on diseases and development, so this work is important to me because it helps me build knowledge about how Osprin developed from preparatorial lactation.

The original contains several independent clauses joined together without suitable punctuation or conjunctions. Dividing the ideas into clear sentences improves the sentence structure.

× I don't like to be an artist because nowadays I am a scientist of course I do experiments in about diseases and development so this is forever and for me because it helped me to build a knowledge about how Osprin developed from preparatorial lactation.

✓ I don't like to be an artist because nowadays I am a scientist. I conduct experiments on diseases and development, so this work is important to me because it helps me build knowledge about how Osprin developed from preparatorial lactation.

The correct preposition after conduct experiments is on, not in about. Say conduct experiments on diseases.

× I don't like to be an artist because nowadays I am a scientist of course I do experiments in about diseases and development so this is forever and for me because it helped me to build a knowledge about how Osprin developed from preparatorial lactation.

✓ I don't like to be an artist because nowadays I am a scientist. I conduct experiments on diseases and development, so this work is important to me because it helps me build knowledge about how Osprin developed from preparatorial lactation.

Knowledge is generally an uncountable noun when referring to knowledge in general, so it does not need the article a. Say build knowledge, not build a knowledge.

× I don't like to be an artist because nowadays I am a scientist of course I do experiments in about diseases and development so this is forever and for me because it helped me to build a knowledge about how Osprin developed from preparatorial lactation.

✓ I don't like to be an artist because nowadays I am a scientist. I conduct experiments on diseases and development, so this work is important to me because it helps me build knowledge about how Osprin developed from preparatorial lactation.

The answer describes the continuing effect of the speaker's current work, so the present-tense verb helps is more suitable than the past-tense verb helped.

× As a scientist, I always like new experiments, new things like mechanistic studies which help me to of course discover new things like track development and how the body responds against respond to different

✓ As a scientist, I always like new experiments and new things, such as mechanistic studies that, of course, help me discover new things, such as tracking development and understanding how the body responds to different stimuli.

The adverb of course is placed awkwardly between to and the verb discover. Place it before the verb phrase or set it off with commas: that, of course, help me discover.

× As a scientist, I always like new experiments, new things like mechanistic studies which help me to of course discover new things like track development and how the body responds against respond to different

✓ As a scientist, I always like new experiments and new things, such as mechanistic studies that, of course, help me discover new things, such as tracking development and understanding how the body responds to different stimuli.

The verb respond is followed by the preposition to when referring to a reaction. The phrase responds against respond to is incorrect and repeats the verb.

× As a scientist, I always like new experiments, new things like mechanistic studies which help me to of course discover new things like track development and how the body responds against respond to different

✓ As a scientist, I always like new experiments and new things, such as mechanistic studies that, of course, help me discover new things, such as tracking development and understanding how the body responds to different stimuli.

The sentence is incomplete and contains repeated words and an incorrect verb phrase. Adding a complete object after responds to and using parallel forms, tracking and understanding, makes the sentence grammatically complete.