Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer, grammatical and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms, avoid filler words (uh) and give one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Also keep to under five sentences.

Ejemplo: I usually remember my dreams only when they feel significant. For example, when I was very stressed about work, I dreamt I was being chased by a man in a fur coat, which stayed in my mind because it reflected my anxiety.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement), complete your thought, avoid repetition and reduce fillers. Use linking words to explain why you share and give one clear example. Keep answer complete and finish the sentence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often share dreams that seem meaningful with my girlfriend because discussing them helps me process my feelings. For instance, if I dream I was chased by someone with a weapon, I tell her because it makes me anxious and we talk about possible causes.

Sugerencia: Be specific and grammatical. Start with a clear position, then give a reason and a concise, coherent example. Avoid vague or confusing phrasing and correct verb forms and pronouns.

Ejemplo: I think it depends on the dream's content because some dreams reflect underlying feelings or issues. For example, dreaming that I am dating multiple women might indicate insecurity or fear about my relationships rather than a literal desire.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence, use correct tense and avoid sentence fragments. Use linking words to connect idea and example, and avoid repeating similar adjectives. Keep it concise.

Ejemplo: It depends on the dream's nature: I would want positive, hopeful dreams to come true but not nightmares. For example, if I dreamt about being chased by a man with a machete and couldn't escape, I would definitely not want that to happen because it is terrifying.

× I only remember my dream when it have a significant meaning and it struck my mind, uh, because of that.

✓ I only remember my dreams when they have a significant meaning and they strike my mind because of that.

Subject-verb agreement and plural consistency: 'dream' should be plural 'dreams' to match general statement; 'it have' is incorrect because plural subject requires 'have' but with singular it would be 'has'; here use 'they have'. 'it struck' mixes past with present general statement; use present 'strike'. Also replace 'it' with 'they' to agree with 'dreams'. Ensure tense consistency for habitual statements by using present simple.

× For example, I remember when I was really stressed out because of my work and I dreamt about being chased by a man, uh, who is fur.

✓ For example, I remember when I was really stressed out because of my work and I dreamt about being chased by a man who had fur.

Incorrect description: 'who is fur' is ungrammatical because 'fur' is a noun; use a verb to describe possession or appearance: 'who had fur' or 'who was covered in fur'. This clarifies the intended meaning and uses correct noun-verb structure.

× I would like to share my dreams when it have a significant meaning to me and I often share it with my loved ones and to share what are my thoughts about the dream for example, uh, if I uh, dream about being traced by a guy with a weapon, I would tell my girlfriend that I'm very.

✓ I would like to share my dreams when they have a significant meaning to me, and I often share them with my loved ones and tell them my thoughts about the dream. For example, if I dream about being chased by a guy with a weapon, I would tell my girlfriend how I feel.

Multiple issues: 'it have' should be 'they have' to match plural 'dreams' and subject-verb agreement. 'share it' should be 'share them'. 'to share what are my thoughts' is incorrect word order; use 'tell them my thoughts' or 'share my thoughts'. 'traced' is wrong verb choice; use 'chased'. The final fragment 'that I'm very.' was incomplete; replace with 'how I feel' to complete the sentence. Use consistent present or conditional tenses for habitual or hypothetical situations.

× I would say it depends on the contents of the dream.

✓ I would say it depends on the content of the dream.

Word choice and number: 'contents' is plural and can be used, but 'content' as an uncountable noun is more natural in this context. Use 'content' to refer to what the dream contains. The rest of the sentence is grammatically correct.

× For example, if I dream about umm, I treated my girlfriend by dating multiple women at the time, I believe it have some kind of special meaning.

✓ For example, if I dream that I treated my girlfriend badly by dating multiple women at the time, I believe it has some kind of special meaning.

Several problems: tense/structure and subject-verb agreement. Use 'dream that I treated' (not 'dream about I treated'). 'Treated my girlfriend by dating multiple women' is awkward; specify 'treated my girlfriend badly by dating multiple women'. 'it have' should be 'it has' to agree with singular 'it' (the dream). Also 'has' fits present-tense general belief.

× Uh, that's happened to my personality.

✓ Uh, that says something about my personality.

Awkward and incorrect structure: 'That's happened to my personality' is ungrammatical. Likely intended meaning is that the dream reflects or reveals something about personality: use 'that says something about my personality' or 'that reflects my personality'. This corrects verb choice and makes the sentence meaningful.

× Actually, I believe it depends on, uh, what the content of the dream.

✓ Actually, I believe it depends on what the content of the dream is.

Sentence fragment and word order: original ends abruptly. Complete the clause with 'is' at the end: 'depends on what the content of the dream is.' Alternatively, reorder as 'depends on the content of the dream.' Ensure sentence has a verb to be complete.

× For example, if I was traced by a guy with a machete in the dream and I was unable to escape from him.

✓ For example, if I was chased by a guy with a machete in the dream and I was unable to escape from him,

Wrong verb choice: 'traced' is incorrect here; use 'chased'. Also this clause is part of a conditional and should connect to the main clause. The verb tenses 'was chased' and 'was unable' are acceptable in a past conditional context, but ensure the sentence completes the thought (see next correction).

× So I would never want that to become true because, uh, it's horrible and horrifying.

✓ So I would never want that to become true because it's horrible and terrifying.

Redundancy and word choice: 'horrible and horrifying' is repetitive; use 'horrible and terrifying' or just 'horrifying'. Also ensure this sentence connects to the prior conditional clause: combine as 'If I was chased... and unable to escape, I would never want that to become true.' This provides clear structure and logical flow.