Mirrors— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatical, concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and word choice, reduce fillers (uh, umm). Provide one or two specific reasons with linking words. For example, say when and why you look in the mirror and give a short supporting detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often look in the mirror before I shower. I usually check my face and brush my teeth, and I also make sure my hair looks tidy, so I take a minute to look carefully.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and remove hesitation. Correct vocabulary (dormancy → dormitory) and tense. Add a brief detail about the purchase to make the answer specific, using linking words like because or so.

Ejemplo: Yes, I bought a mirror when I moved into a dormitory before I started working at the hospital. Because I had to buy all my own items, I remember buying a small mirror for my desk.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and hesitations. Start with a direct answer and give one clear condition when you do carry a mirror. Improve grammar (washing my hands) and use a linking phrase like however or only when.

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't carry a mirror. However, I sometimes use a small compact mirror in public restrooms to check my appearance after washing my hands.

Sugerencia: Begin with a straightforward answer, reduce fillers, and give a concise reason with a linking word. Use clearer vocabulary (space is small) and provide a brief comparison to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn't use mirrors as decoration because my room is very small. I prefer to prioritize essential furniture like the bed and the closet rather than decorative mirrors.

× Yes, I like looking myself, uh, before the mirror, uh, especially before take a shower because I need to umm, wash my teeth and wash my fast so I look umm, carefully in, in the mirror.

✓ Yes, I like looking at myself in the mirror, especially before I take a shower because I need to brush my teeth and wash my face so I can look carefully in the mirror.

The sentence uses incorrect pronoun/verb patterns and missing prepositions. 'looking myself' should be 'looking at myself' (verb + preposition). 'before take a shower' needs subject and auxiliary: 'before I take a shower'. 'wash my teeth' is better as 'brush my teeth', and 'wash my fast' is incorrect; likely 'wash my face'. Also add 'so I can' to show purpose. Suggestion: include correct prepositions, subjects for clauses, and use common collocations like 'brush my teeth'.

× Yes, of course umm before I work in the hospital I live in a dormancy and I need to buy everything by myself, including mirrors. So that's the umm, only time I bought I remembered.

✓ Yes, of course. Before I worked in the hospital I lived in a dormitory and I had to buy everything by myself, including mirrors. So that was the only time I remember buying one.

Tense and word choice errors: the original mixes present and past inconsistently. Use past tense 'worked' and 'lived' for past situations. 'Need to buy' should be past 'had to buy'. 'Dormancy' is wrong word; correct is 'dormitory'. 'So that's the only time I bought I remembered' is ungrammatical—use 'So that was the only time I remember buying one.' Suggestion: keep past tense consistently for past events and use correct nouns.

× To be honest, I don't usually take a mirror with me, umm, because I, umm, don't usually, uh, take a mirror, but I But when I go to uh, toilets after the after washing my hand, I need to.

✓ To be honest, I don't usually take a mirror with me. But when I go to the toilet after washing my hands, I do need one.

Article and number errors and phrasing: use 'the toilet' (definite article for facility) not 'toilets' in this context; 'washing my hand' should be plural 'washing my hands'. The sentence also repeats phrases and lacks an object at the end—use 'one' to refer to a mirror. Suggestion: use 'the' for specific facilities, plural for hands, and include appropriate pronoun or noun for clarity.

× No uh, especially my room space is so small so umm I don't use my mirror to decorate my room. I believe umm, the bed or or the closet is more important than mirror.

✓ No. My room is very small, so I don't use a mirror to decorate it. I think the bed or the closet is more important than a mirror.

Pronoun and article issues: 'my room space is so small' is awkward—use 'My room is very small'. 'decorate my room' then 'it' can replace repeated noun. 'than mirror' needs an article: 'than a mirror'. Also use 'I think' rather than 'I believe umm'. Suggestion: simplify noun phrases, use articles before singular countable nouns, and replace repeated nouns with pronouns for fluency.