Road— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Javobni aniq va grammatik jihatdan to‘g‘ri qilib ifoda eting. Qisqa va lo‘nda boshlang (topic sentence), so‘ng kerak bo‘lsa 1–2 qo‘shimcha tafsilot bering. Fe’llarning shakllarini va birlik-ko‘plik mosligini tuzating (many kinds of cars, cause, it doesn't). Gaplarni bog‘lash uchun linking words (for example, because, so) ishlating. Og‘zaki pauzalarni kamaytiring va noaniq iboralarni (some extents, uh) o‘rniga aniq misollar keltiring.

Ejemplo: Yes, the roads near my home are very busy. Most mornings there are heavy traffic jams because many people drive to work, so cars move very slowly. For example, yesterday it took me an extra 20 minutes to reach the supermarket due to the congestion.

Sugerencia: To‘g‘ri grammatik konstruktsiyalar va oddiy gap tuzilmasini ishlating. Jumlani mavzu bilan boshlang (“Yes, many people cross the road...”), keyin sabab yoki holatni tushuntiring. Fe‘l va predloglar (cross the road, be in a hurry, go to work) to‘g‘riligiga e’tibor qarating. Kerak bo‘lsa bog‘lovchi so‘zlar (because, so, therefore) qo‘shing va noaniq atamalarni aniqroq qiling.

Ejemplo: Yes, many people cross the roads in my city because they are often in a hurry to get to work. For instance, during rush hour people frequently run across pedestrian crossings without waiting for the light to change.

Sugerencia: Javobni aniq va grammatik jihatdan to‘g‘ri qilib tuzing. Yilingizni va o‘zgartirishlarni aniq ifoda eting (This year, our road was rebuilt). Noto‘g‘ri so‘zlar o‘rniga mos so‘zlardan foydalaning (traffic signs, fewer accidents). Gaplarni bog‘lash uchun linking words ishlating (because, so, as a result).

Ejemplo: This year our main road was rebuilt and new traffic signs were installed. As a result, the road is now in good condition and there have been fewer accidents lately.

Sugerencia: Javobni aniq fikr va sabab bilan boshlang (No, I don't think they need improvement because...). Grammatik tuzilmani to‘g‘rilang (It’s not necessary to improve our roads). Kerakli vaqt ifodasini aniqroq ayting (about ten months ago the roads were reconstructed). Oddiy, mantiqiy bog‘lovchi iboralar qo‘shing va ortiqcha so‘zlardan qoching.

Ejemplo: No, I don't think the roads need improvement at the moment because they were reconstructed about ten months ago. Since then the surface has been smooth and the traffic management has improved.

× I live in the town but there are many kind of cars that is to cause the busy roads and there are also traffic jams but it's don't reduce the accident. Sometimes there will be some extents, uh, about.

✓ I live in the town but there are many kinds of cars that cause the busy roads and there are also traffic jams, but they don't reduce accidents. Sometimes there are some extentions, uh, about.

The sentence uses incorrect singular/plural forms: 'many kind' should be 'many kinds' and 'accident' should be plural 'accidents' because multiple incidents are implied. 'there are many kinds of cars that is to cause' uses singular verb 'is' with plural subject; it should be 'that cause'. Also 'it's don't' mixes singular contraction with plural verb; use 'they don't'. Suggestion: identify the subject number (singular/plural) and make nouns and verbs agree: use plural nouns with plural verbs and plural pronouns when referring to multiple items. Note: 'extentions' likely intended 'extent' or 'incidents'—clarify meaning and choose correct plural form.

× Absolutely yes, many people to cross the road in the city because they maybe they to in hurry to go their work. This time they must to cross the board.

✓ Absolutely yes, many people cross the road in the city because they may be in a hurry to go to work. At that time they must cross the road.

Incorrect use of infinitive marker 'to' with verbs where simple present or modal forms are required, and misuse of modal 'maybe' and 'must'. 'many people to cross' should be 'many people cross' (simple present for habitual action). 'they maybe they to in hurry' should be 'they may be in a hurry'. 'must to cross' incorrectly adds 'to' after 'must'; modals are followed by the base verb without 'to'. Also 'their work' can be simply 'work' and 'board' is wrong word choice; use 'road'. Suggestion: after modal verbs (may, must) use base verb; for habitual actions use simple present; avoid extra 'to'.

× In this year, our route re rebuilt and uh, there are put new traffic chains for the season. Our role now very well and there are also less strict genes or accidents.

✓ This year, our route was rebuilt and new traffic signs were put in place for the season. Our road is now very good and there are also fewer serious injuries or accidents.

Multiple tense and word choice errors: 'In this year' should be 'This year'. Passive past 'was rebuilt' is required instead of 're rebuilt'. 'there are put new traffic chains' incorrectly uses present passive; correct passive past is 'new traffic signs were put in place'. 'Our role now very well' lacks verb and has misspelling; 'Our road is now very good'. 'less strict genes or accidents' is incorrect word choice and comparative form; use 'fewer serious injuries or accidents'. Suggestion: use correct past passive for completed actions this year and choose accurate vocabulary ('signs', 'road', 'fewer', 'serious injuries').

× From my perspective, it's not neat to improve our route, because about 10 or 11 months ago our world reconstructed for this reason, is not.

✓ From my perspective, it is not necessary to improve our road, because about 10 or 11 months ago it was reconstructed for that reason.

Sentence structure and word choice issues: 'it's not neat' is incorrect collocation; use 'not necessary'. 'improve our route' better as 'improve our road'. 'our world reconstructed' is unclear and ungrammatical; use 'it was reconstructed'. The phrase 'for this reason, is not' is a fragmented negative; rewrite to a clear clause 'because... it was reconstructed'. Suggestion: use clear collocations ('necessary'), correct subject ('it' or 'the road'), and proper past passive ('was reconstructed') to express completed actions.