Science— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one brief supporting detail. Avoid repetition ("main reason" and "main subjects"). Also correct small grammatical slips (e.g., "in class 11 and 12" or "in 11th and 12th grade").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy science a lot. For example, I chose physics, chemistry and biology in 11th and 12th grade because I find their methods logical and practical.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer then one clear reason. Avoid hedging words like "I think probably"; use one linking phrase to connect your reason and avoid repeating "logical" twice.

Ejemplo: I started learning science around ninth grade. At that time I realized I liked its practical experiments and logical explanations, which suited the way I think.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with one clear preference, then give two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid vague or incorrect phrases like "based on your consent" and reduce filler phrases. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "understanding" instead of "consent").

Ejemplo: I find physics most interesting because it focuses on real-life problem solving and helps me build conceptual understanding. For example, mechanics explains everyday motions, so I can apply formulas to practical situations.

Sugerencia: Be careful with content: avoid describing dangerous or violent experiments and avoid unclear phrasing. Instead, describe safe, specific school experiments and their learning outcomes. Keep answers concise and orderly.

Ejemplo: In high school I did several safe experiments, such as testing acidity with pH indicators and observing chemical reactions between baking soda and vinegar. These experiments taught me how to record observations and draw conclusions.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear statement and give a concise example of a program you watched, with one reason why you liked it. Reduce fillers and awkward phrasing (e.g., "I was the Web Cities"). Use neutral, accurate descriptions.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy science TV shows. For example, I recently watched the series Young Sheldon because I like seeing how the character solves problems and learns about science at a young age.

Sugerencia: Avoid broad generalizations about a whole nationality. Answer directly with a balanced view and give a specific reason or example. Use clearer vocabulary (e.g., "interested in learning" instead of "grab things") and correct word choice ("concurred" is incorrect).

Ejemplo: I believe many people in China visit science museums, especially families and students, because museums offer interactive exhibits that support learning outside school.

× Yes, I do like science a lot.

✓ Yes, I like science a lot.

Using 'do' for emphasis is not incorrect, but in a simple response 'I like' is more natural. Remove the unnecessary auxiliary to match typical present simple usage.

× This is the main reason I took physics, chemistry and biology as my main subjects in my class 11th and 12th.

✓ This is the main reason I took physics, chemistry and biology as my main subjects in my 11th and 12th classes.

Use proper ordinal placement and articles: 'class 11th and 12th' is nonstandard. Use '11th and 12th classes' or '11th and 12th grades'. Also avoid repeating 'main'.

× I think probably it was class 9th.

✓ I think I probably started in 9th grade.

Mix of present belief and past event is awkward. Use 'started' to indicate when the action began and use standard phrasing '9th grade' or '9th class'.

× I discovered science that it is a very practical and logical subject for me and things work out very logically in this subject.

✓ I discovered that science is a very practical and logical subject for me, and things work out very logically in it.

The verb 'discovered' should be followed by 'that' plus a clause. Avoid repeating 'subject' and reposition 'very logically' for flow. Use 'in it' instead of repeating 'subject'.

× Which science subject is interesting to you?

✓ Which science subject is most interesting to you?

'Interesting to you' is understandable but 'most interesting to you' or 'which science subject do you find interesting?' is more natural. Adjust adjective/adverb to clarify degree.

× Oh that's a hard question for me because I like every single science subject like physics, chemistry and biology.

✓ Oh, that's a hard question for me because I like every science subject, such as physics, chemistry, and biology.

Use 'every science subject' or 'every single science subject' but pair with 'such as' to list examples. Add commas for clarity.

× But for the most of them I like physics because it contains real life problem solving and conceptual knowledge.

✓ But among them I like physics the most because it involves real-life problem solving and conceptual understanding.

'For the most of them' is incorrect; use 'among them' or 'of all of them' and 'the most' for superlative. Use 'involves' instead of 'contains' and hyphenate 'real-life'.

× And you do not need to cram anything in this subject, it's just based on your consent.

✓ And you do not need to cram anything in this subject; it's just based on your concepts.

'Based on your consent' is incorrect word choice. Likely intended 'concepts'. Use semicolon or conjunction to join clauses properly.

× I have performed very kind of experiments in my high school time.

✓ I performed many kinds of experiments during my high school years.

Use simple past 'performed' with 'during my high school years'. 'Very kind of experiments' is incorrect; use 'many kinds of experiments' or 'various experiments'.

× I have performed acidic tests.

✓ I performed acid tests.

Use simple past for completed past actions. 'Acidic tests' is unnatural; 'acid tests' is the correct term.

× I have used sodium to add water in it and prepare a bomb and other things too.

✓ I added water to sodium and created a small explosion and other things too.

Correct preposition is 'add water to sodium', not 'add water in it'. 'Prepare a bomb' is dangerous phrasing; 'created a small explosion' is safer and more accurate for chemical reaction. Use past tense consistently.

× Oh, oh, yeah. I do like watching science TV programs a lot.

✓ Oh, yeah, I like watching science TV programs a lot.

Remove extra auxiliary 'do' for natural present simple. Reduce filler 'oh, oh' to 'oh' for natural speech.

× Recently I was the Web Cities, which was Young Sheldon.

✓ Recently I watched the web series Young Sheldon.

'I was the Web Cities' is incorrect. Use 'watched the web series' and name the series. Use past tense 'watched' for a completed recent action.

× In that web series, there was a child who was miraculously very good in science and everything.

✓ In that web series, there was a child who was miraculously very good at science and in many other areas.

Use 'good at' rather than 'good in'. Clarify 'everything' to 'many other areas' for natural expression.

× He was a very super intelligent child.

✓ He was a very intelligent child.

'Very super intelligent' is redundant and ungrammatical. Use 'very intelligent' or 'super-intelligent' but not both together.

× And I like that web Series A lot.

✓ And I like that web series a lot.

'Series' should not be capitalized mid-sentence. Use consistent capitalization and articles.

× Do Chinese people often visit science museums?

✓ Do Chinese people often visit science museums?

Question is grammatically correct; no change needed.

× I think Chinese people are really known for their tendency to learn things and grab things easily, and science is one of them that they have concurred a lot in and I think they visit science museums very often.

✓ I think Chinese people are known for their eagerness to learn and for grasping things easily; science is one field they have excelled in, and I think they visit science museums often.

Replace vague 'tendency to learn things and grab things' with 'eagerness to learn and grasp things'. 'Concurred a lot in' is incorrect; use 'excelled in'. Simplify and split into clearer clauses. Remove redundant 'I think'.