Science— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, and add one specific reason or example. Use linking words for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I have liked science since childhood because it explains how everyday things work, such as why rain forms. For example, I was fascinated when I learned how electricity powers homes, which made me want to learn more.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, grammatical sentence with a short supporting detail. Use a time expression and a brief example of an early science activity to make the answer specific.

Ejemplo: I started learning about science when I was about five or six years old. I remember doing simple experiments at kindergarten, like mixing colors to see chemical reactions, which left a strong impression on me.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a topic sentence, then give one or two clear reasons with examples. Avoid unnecessary words and correct basic grammar (e.g., "allows me to learn about").

Ejemplo: I find geography the most interesting science subject because it teaches me about different places and climates. For instance, learning about deserts and how they form helped me understand why some regions are so dry.

Sugerencia: Be specific about activities and describe one clearly. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "chemistry experiments") and avoid vague phrases. Use a linking word to connect the activity to your reaction.

Ejemplo: I have done simple chemistry experiments, such as mixing baking soda and vinegar to create a reaction. It was exciting to see the bubbling and realize how chemical reactions produce gas.

Sugerencia: Respond clearly and give a brief reason or example. Correct tense and avoid asking rhetorical questions back. Use one linking word to add detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. As a child I often watched science programs before bed because they explained animals and space in an entertaining way. For example, a documentary about the solar system inspired me to read more about planets.

Sugerencia: Make the statement more natural and accurate. Use linking words and specific reasons or examples, and avoid unclear phrases (e.g., "arcades horizons").

Ejemplo: Yes, many Chinese families visit science museums on weekends and holidays to give children hands-on learning experiences. For example, parents often take kids to interactive exhibits about dinosaurs or space to spark their curiosity.

× It's definitely when I was a child, I liked science very much because it can, I can know some interesting things that I don't, I don't, uh, touch in the past.

✓ When I was a child, I definitely liked science because it helped me learn interesting things that I had not encountered before.

This sentence mixes present and past tenses and uses incorrect present modal 'can' with past context. Use past tense 'liked' and past perfect 'had not encountered' to show prior lack of experience; replace 'can/I can know' with 'helped me learn' to make the meaning clear and grammatically correct.

× My memory I have a deep impression about it when I was age 5 or 6.

✓ I have a clear memory of it from when I was about five or six years old.

Original phrasing is awkward and misuses noun phrases. Use 'I have a clear memory of' and 'from when I was about five or six years old' to express the time reference correctly; this fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× In my opinion, I absolutely choose geography because it can let me to know a different spaces and different, uh, weathers or some interesting things. Yes.

✓ In my opinion, I would definitely choose geography because it allows me to learn about different places, climates, and other interesting things.

'Choose' should be conditional 'would choose' to fit opinion context. 'Can let me to know' is incorrect; use 'allows me to learn about'. 'Spaces' and 'weathers' are incorrect nouns here; use 'places' and 'climates'. This corrects verb form and preposition usage ('learn about').

× Like chemist chemistry, I do SI had some experiments in the past that I haven't seen ever seen before.

✓ For example, in chemistry, I did some experiments in the past that I had never seen before.

This sentence mixes present and past forms and has redundant words. Use 'in chemistry' and past simple 'did' for completed actions. Use past perfect 'had never seen' to indicate prior lack of experience. Remove duplicates ('ever seen' and extra words).

× You know, it's so amazing when I saw the some beauty saying.

✓ You know, it was so amazing when I saw the beauty of those experiments.

The original uses ungrammatical phrasing 'the some beauty saying'. Use 'it was so amazing' (past tense) and 'the beauty of those experiments' to convey the intended meaning with correct adjective-noun order and article usage.

× Yes, of course. When I was a child I always watching science TV programs before I go to bed. Yes or no?

✓ Yes, of course. When I was a child I always watched science TV programs before I went to bed.

The original mixes past habitual action with a present progressive 'watching' and present 'go'. Use simple past 'watched' and 'went' for repeated past actions. Remove unnecessary tag 'Yes or no?'.

× Yes, of course Chinese people will bring their children to visit science museums like on weekends and on holidays because they want to broaden their arcades horizons, you know?

✓ Yes, of course. Chinese people often take their children to visit science museums on weekends and holidays because they want to broaden their horizons.

'Will bring' implies future; 'often take' fits habitual action. Remove 'like' before time expressions. 'Arcades horizons' is incorrect; use 'their horizons'. This corrects verb tense and quantifier/adverb usage.