Science— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and avoid repetitions. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and grammar (e.g., "I became").

Ejemplo: I’m not a big fan of science because I often found it difficult and confusing. However, I did well in high school and even became the leader of the science club, where I enjoyed running experiments.

Sugerencia: Use a clear timeline: one topic sentence about when you started, then linked detail(s). Fix grammar ("became"). Avoid long sentences by using linking words like "then" or "later".

Ejemplo: I first learned about science in elementary school, where we studied basic topics like plants and simple experiments. Later, the subject became more challenging in high school, and I eventually decided not to study it at university.

Sugerencia: Be natural and precise. Use a topic sentence naming the subject, then give a specific reason. Avoid informal or unclear words like "funny" when you mean "excited" or "amused."

Ejemplo: I like chemistry the most because I enjoy hands-on experiments. Performing reactions in the lab makes me feel excited and helps me understand how substances interact.

Sugerencia: This answer is good: clear and specific. Improve slightly by correcting grammar and adding one linking phrase to show result or feeling.

Ejemplo: Once I mixed several chemical solutions and watched them change into vivid colors. Although I couldn't name the chemicals, the dramatic color changes surprised me and made me appreciate how fascinating science can be.

Sugerencia: Clarify contradiction and use a topic sentence. If you dislike them, say so clearly and support with specific reasons and an example. Avoid confusing negatives like "No, I really watched..."

Ejemplo: No, I don’t watch many science TV programs because they often discuss complex theories and use technical vocabulary that I find hard to follow. For example, I stopped watching a documentary when it started using advanced physics terms without explanation.

Sugerencia: Good response. Make it more natural by using smoother linking phrases and more precise vocabulary (e.g., "simultaneously" or "while"). Avoid capitalizing common nouns unnecessarily.

Ejemplo: Yes, many people visit science museums regularly. I think it’s because museums have interactive exhibits where visitors can have fun while learning about scientific concepts.

× No, I'm not a huge fan of science. I've I've always found it difficult and confusing.

✓ No, I'm not a huge fan of science. I've always found it difficult and confusing.

The sentence contains a duplicated contraction 'I've' which is a typographical/repetition error rather than a tense error; however it affects present perfect usage readability. Remove the extra 'I've' so the present perfect 'I've always found' correctly shows an experience continuing to the present. Suggestion: proofread to eliminate repeated words or contractions.

× However, I did well in my high school science classes and even become the leader of the science club because I enjoyed doing experiments.

✓ However, I did well in my high school science classes and even became the leader of the science club because I enjoyed doing experiments.

The verb 'become' should be in its past form 'became' to match the past tense 'did' and 'enjoyed'. This is a past participle/past-tense consistency issue. Use past tense for completed past events. Suggestion: match verb forms in a sequence of past actions.

× I was first introduced to science in elementary school where we learned basic concepts like plants and simple experiments, and it become more challenging in high school as the topics get deeper and I eventually decided not to study science at university.

✓ I was first introduced to science in elementary school where we learned basic concepts like plants and simple experiments, and it became more challenging in high school as the topics got deeper and I eventually decided not to study science at university.

The verb 'become' should be 'became' to maintain past-tense consistency with 'was introduced', 'learned', and 'decided'. Use past tense for events that happened in the past. Suggestion: ensure all verbs describing past events use past tense.

× I think I like chemistry the best since doing experiments is my favorite part of learning science, which makes me feel interested and funny.

✓ I think I like chemistry the best since doing experiments is my favorite part of learning science, which makes me feel interested and amused.

The adjective 'funny' is incorrect here because it means 'causing laughter' or 'strange'. The intended meaning is that experiments make the student feel entertained or amused. Replace 'funny' with 'amused' or 'interested'. Also 'I think I like' is acceptable present tense for preferences; no tense change needed. Suggestion: choose adjectives that accurately reflect the intended emotion.

× I once mixed several chemical liquid and watched them change into vivid colors.

✓ I once mixed several chemical liquids and watched them change into vivid colors.

The noun phrase 'chemical liquid' should be plural 'chemical liquids' to agree with 'several'. When using quantifiers like 'several', the noun must be plural. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches quantifiers.

× Even though I don't remember the exact name of the chemicals, the striking color transformations really surprised me and made me appreciate how amazing science is.

✓ Even though I don't remember the exact names of the chemicals, the striking color transformations really surprised me and made me appreciate how amazing science is.

If referring to multiple chemicals, 'name' should be plural 'names' to agree with 'the chemicals'. This is a number agreement/item reference issue combined with article usage. Suggestion: make nouns plural when referring to multiple items.

× No, I really watched science TV programs because I find them confusing when they discuss challenging theories or use technical vocabulary.

✓ No, I rarely watch science TV programs because I find them confusing when they discuss challenging theories or use technical vocabulary.

The original 'I really watched' is incorrect in meaning and tense. Likely intended 'I rarely watch' (habitual present) or 'I don't really watch'. 'Rarely' or 'don't really' correctly expresses low frequency in present. Change to present simple 'watch' to match the general habit 'I find'. Suggestion: use appropriate adverb of frequency and present simple for habitual actions.

× Yes, many people do visit Science Museum frequently. I think the main reason is that these museums usually have lots of interactive exhibits which people can have fun meanwhile learn lots of scientific knowledge.

✓ Yes, many people do visit science museums frequently. I think the main reason is that these museums usually have lots of interactive exhibits where people can have fun and learn a lot of scientific knowledge.

'Science Museum' as a general place should be 'science museums' (plural) or 'the science museum' if referring to a specific one. Also 'do visit' is grammatically possible but unnecessary; present simple 'visit' is fine. 'Meanwhile' is incorrectly used; use 'and' or 'while' instead. 'Lots of scientific knowledge' is better as 'a lot of scientific knowledge'. Use 'where' for location clauses. Suggestion: use plural/singular consistently for general references, replace 'meanwhile' with 'and' or 'while', and use natural collocations like 'a lot of'.