Science— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời tự nhiên nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt lặp (ví dụ “as a kid” và thì không nhất quán). Nên mở đầu trực tiếp, dùng thì phù hợp và tránh dư thừa. Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động bạn thích để làm câu trả lời rõ hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have always enjoyed science. As a child I loved doing simple experiments, like making volcano models, because they showed me how reactions work and made classes exciting.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời quá dài và lộn xộn, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp (mạo từ, thì, từ lặp). Nên trả lời trực tiếp: nêu thời điểm, rồi giải thích ngắn gọn và cụ thể về những môn bạn học. Dùng liên từ hợp lý để mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: I began learning science in primary school because it was a compulsory subject there. We covered basic topics like biology, physics and simple chemistry, which helped me understand the world around me.

Sugerencia: Ý chính rõ ràng và có ví dụ, nhưng có lỗi từ (ví dụ “missing vinyl sugar”) và một vài cấu trúc có thể tinh gọn. Nên sửa từ vựng chuyên ngành cho chính xác và dùng liên từ để nối ý mượt hơn.

Ejemplo: Chemistry interests me the most because it explains how substances react to form new compounds. For instance, I enjoy simple lab tests like mixing vinegar and baking soda to observe the bubbling reaction, which makes the concepts clearer.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nội dung tốt nhưng ngữ pháp, trật tự từ và một số từ sai (ví dụ “wild”, “how by how blends grow”). Nên mở đầu trực tiếp, trình bày hành động cụ thể và cảm nhận bằng từ vựng chính xác, dùng một hoặc hai câu hỗ trợ.

Ejemplo: When I was in high school, I participated in a project to plant and care for a tree. I planted an apple tree and watched it eventually bear fruit, which made me excited and curious about plant growth.

Sugerencia: Nội dung tốt nhưng câu dài, lặp từ, nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai (ví dụ “animal words”, “rainy raise me awareness”). Nên chia câu ngắn, sửa từ vựng, nêu ví dụ chương trình và giải thích ngắn gọn lợi ích cụ thể.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often watch science programs, especially wildlife documentaries on VTV. I watch them in my free time because they teach me about animal behaviour, habitats and conservation, which raises my awareness of environmental issues.

Sugerencia: Ý trả lời rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi từ vựng và phát âm thể hiện qua transcript (ví dụ “bigger sleep places”, “high hands on”). Nên dùng cấu trúc mạch lạc, thay những cụm từ sai bằng thuật ngữ chính xác và giảm tiếng lắp để tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, people often visit science museums, especially parents with young children. These museums offer hands-on exhibitions and live demonstrations where kids can try interactive experiments and attend science shows, which broaden their knowledge and awareness of environmental issues.

× Yes, I love science as a kid because I enjoyed doing experience and learning how things work, so I always looked forward to science classes.

✓ Yes, I loved science as a kid because I enjoyed doing experiments and learning how things worked, so I always looked forward to science classes.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'As a kid' refers to the past, so verbs should be in past tense: 'love' -> 'loved', 'learning how things work' -> 'how things worked'. Also 'doing experience' is incorrect word choice; use the plural noun 'experiments'. Improve consistency by keeping all verbs in the past when referring to childhood.

× Actually, I started to learn the science when I was student at my primary school because at that time science was considered as a compulsory subject, a subject and which which was about mathematics, biology and chemicals or even physics which helped me to know about the everything around me.

✓ Actually, I started to learn science when I was a student at my primary school because at that time science was considered a compulsory subject that covered mathematics, biology, chemistry and even physics, which helped me learn about everything around me.

Problems: unnecessary article 'the' before 'science'; missing article 'a' before 'student'; redundant and incorrect phrases 'a subject and which which'; wrong word 'chemicals' should be 'chemistry'; wrong 'to know about the everything' should be 'learn about everything'. Use past tense consistently and simplify clauses. Use 'that covered' to link subjects and 'which helped me learn' for the result clause.

× For me, chemistry is the most interesting science because it explains how different substances interact and form new products. I also enjoy practical lab experiments, for example missing vinyl sugar or baking soda to see a chemical reaction, which helps me understand the concepts better.

✓ For me, chemistry is the most interesting science because it explains how different substances interact and form new products. I also enjoy practical lab experiments, for example mixing vinegar, sugar or baking soda to see a chemical reaction, which helps me understand the concepts better.

Errors: 'missing' should be 'mixing' (verb choice); 'vinyl' is incorrect, likely 'vinegar'; list punctuation: use commas between items. 'Mixing vinegar, sugar or baking soda' is the correct phrase. These are word choice and collocation issues rather than tense errors.

× All while when I was as high school student, my work was to plant a tree and take care of it every day. I planted an apple tree and after a while it produced fruit which made me feel wild and fascinated how by how blends grow.

✓ When I was a high school student, my project was to plant a tree and take care of it every day. I planted an apple tree and after a while it produced fruit, which made me feel excited and fascinated by how plants grow.

Issues: awkward phrasing 'All while when I was as high school student' corrected to 'When I was a high school student'; 'my work was to' -> 'my project was to' or 'my task was to'; 'wild and fascinated' wrong adjective 'wild' replaced with 'excited'; 'how by how blends grow' is garbled—should be 'fascinated by how plants grow'. Use past tense consistently.

× Of course, actually I always watch many TV programs about science, especially about the animal world on VTV too every single day. I will watch it every when I have spare time because it helps me enhance my knowledge about the animal words as as well as their habitats and environments which are rainy raise me awareness. Are protecting environment as well as endangered animals.

✓ Of course. I always watch many TV programs about science, especially about the animal world on VTV, almost every day. I watch them whenever I have spare time because they help me enhance my knowledge about animals as well as their habitats and environments, which raises my awareness about protecting the environment and endangered species.

Problems: inconsistent tense and modal 'will watch' changed to present 'watch' for habitual action; 'every when' -> 'whenever'; 'animal words' -> 'animals'; duplicated 'as as'; 'which are rainy raise me awareness' is incorrect and unclear—replace with 'which raises my awareness about protecting the environment and endangered species'. Correct plural agreement 'programs' -> 'them' pronoun. Maintain present simple for habitual activities.

× Of course, uh, our residents, especially parents, often take their children to science museums, bigger sleep places, often high hands on exhibitions and live de demonstrations that make science interesting. For example, children can try interactive experiments and visit umm, science shows, which have broadened their knowledge and raised, uh, awareness about science and the environment.

✓ Of course. Our residents, especially parents, often take their children to science museums, which offer many hands-on exhibitions and live demonstrations that make science interesting. For example, children can try interactive experiments and attend science shows, which broaden their knowledge and raise awareness about science and the environment.

Issues: 'bigger sleep places' is meaningless; likely intended 'bigger, popular places' or omitted—replace with 'which offer many hands-on exhibitions'; 'high hands on' -> 'hands-on'; 'live de demonstrations' -> 'live demonstrations'. Tense correction: 'have broadened' -> 'broaden' and 'raised' -> 'raise' to match general truth/habitual context. Pronoun and word choice fixes improve clarity.