Bike— Part 1 Informe

PrácticaPart12026-11-03 23:00:27

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Yes, I have a back when I was 10 years old and I like the back very much. Um I go back to school every day.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Yes, I think it's pretty popular. When I go to work, I saw many people at bicycle to work out to school.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 5.0Fluidez y coherencia: 5.0Pronunciación: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso léxico: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Puntuación: 40.0

Sugerencia: 回答切题,但注意使用过去时:描述童年经历时用“had”“liked”“rode”,不要用“have”“like”。“back”应为“bike”,而“go back to school”不等于“骑车上学”,可说“rode my bike to school”。建议用一到两句直接回答,并补充一个具体细节,例如骑车上学或喜欢骑车的原因。

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was ten, and I loved riding it. I rode it to school every day, which was both convenient and fun.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Puntuación: 45.0

Sugerencia: 先明确回答“bikes are popular”,注意主谓一致:复数 bikes 对应“they are”,而不是“it’s”。描述日常观察时要保持时态一致,可用一般现在时“see”。表达“骑自行车去上班或上学”可说“ride their bikes to work or school”;“work out”通常表示锻炼,不适合这里。可以补充自行车受欢迎的具体原因。

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people riding them to work or school, especially because they’re an affordable and convenient way to get around.

Gramática

5: Past tense issue(过去时问题)

× Yes, I have a back when I was 10 years old and I like the back very much.

✓ Yes, I had a back when I was 10 years old, and I liked the back very much.

这句话描述的是你10岁时的经历,应使用过去时。have 应改为 had;结合上下文,like 也应改为 liked。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× Yes, I think it's pretty popular.

✓ Yes, I think they're pretty popular.

问题问的是复数名词 bikes,因此用来指代 bikes 的代词应为 they,而不是单数代词 it。

6: Present tense issue(现在时问题)

× When I go to work, I saw many people at bicycle to work out to school.

✓ When I go to work, I see many people riding bicycles to work or to school.

When I go to work 表示经常发生的情况,后面的动词也应使用一般现在时,所以 saw 应改为 see。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× When I go to work, I saw many people at bicycle to work out to school.

✓ When I go to work, I see many people riding bicycles to work or to school.

at bicycle 不是表达骑自行车的正确搭配。可以说 ride a bicycle,也可以说 ride bicycles;这里改成 riding bicycles,使表达自然、正确。

16: Incorrect conjunction use(连词使用错误)

× When I go to work, I saw many people at bicycle to work out to school.

✓ When I go to work, I see many people riding bicycles to work or to school.

这里是在列举人们骑车前往的两个地点,应使用表示选择的连词 or。to work out to school 中的 out 不能连接这两个目的地。

Vocabulario

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Pretty— Attractive; Quite; Beautify
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