Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 先直接回答小时候是否有自行车，并注意区分“小时候”和“高中时”。表达“作为礼物”应使用“as a present”；“山地车”是“mountain bike”，不是“mountain bag”。原回答中“basketball”与后文骑车不一致，建议确认并改成“bike”。结尾可以保留喜欢骑车的原因，避免信息前后矛盾。

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My grandpa gave me a blue mountain bike as a present when I was in high school, and I rode it to school every day. I loved it because it was fast and saved me time.

Sugerencia: 回答方向明确，但“in my opinion”和“I think”意思重复，保留一个即可。“骑自行车上班”可说“cycling to work”或“riding a bike to work”；“交通拥堵”应说“traffic jams”，且这里谈普遍情况要用现在时。建议用具体原因说明自行车为何受欢迎，并控制在两三句内。

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people cycle to work because it’s convenient and helps them avoid traffic jams.

× In my opinion, I think take the bicycle to work is very convenient, because in a big city the there was always traffic jam every day.

✓ In my opinion, I think taking the bicycle to work is very convenient, because in a big city there is always a traffic jam every day.

在句子中，动词短语“take the bicycle to work”作主语，应使用动名词形式“taking”。可记住：动词短语作主语时，通常用“动词-ing”形式。

× In my opinion, I think take the bicycle to work is very convenient, because in a big city the there was always traffic jam every day.

✓ In my opinion, I think taking the bicycle to work is very convenient, because in a big city there is always a traffic jam every day.

“there”结构前不需要加定冠词“the”。应删除“the”，直接使用“there is/was”。检查句子时，注意不要在“There be”结构前额外添加冠词。

× In my opinion, I think take the bicycle to work is very convenient, because in a big city the there was always traffic jam every day.

✓ In my opinion, I think taking the bicycle to work is very convenient, because in a big city there is always a traffic jam every day.

这里描述的是大城市的一般情况，问题也询问对自行车是否受欢迎的看法，因此应使用一般现在时。“was”是过去时，应改为“is”。谈论普遍事实或日常情况时，通常使用一般现在时。

× In my opinion, I think take the bicycle to work is very convenient, because in a big city the there was always traffic jam every day.

✓ In my opinion, I think taking the bicycle to work is very convenient, because in a big city there is always a traffic jam every day.

“traffic jam”是可数名词单数，前面需要加冠词。这里可说“a traffic jam”。遇到可数名词单数时，要检查它前面是否有“a/an”或“the”等限定词。