Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm và có thêm ý về việc chiếc xe không còn phù hợp khi lớn lên. Tuy nhiên, câu trả lời có nhiều lần ngập ngừng, lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp; hãy dùng quá khứ đơn nhất quán ("had", "bought", "grew up") và nói "bike" thay vì "pie". Nên mở rộng bằng một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn ai mua xe hoặc bạn thường đạp xe ở đâu.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small bike when I was about seven. I loved riding it around my neighborhood, but I eventually outgrew it.

Sugerencia: Bạn nêu được ý chính rằng xe đạp phổ biến và đưa ra một tình huống sử dụng, nhưng câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và có nhiều lỗi diễn đạt. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng "Yes, they are" thay vì "Yet", tránh lặp cụm "in my country", và dùng hiện tại đơn đúng: "people use their bikes". Bạn cũng nên hoàn thành ý bằng một lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể, chẳng hạn đi chợ gần nhà.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. Many people use them to go to nearby markets because they are affordable and convenient.

× When I was young, I have a pie.

✓ When I was young, I had a bike.

The sentence describes a past experience, so use the past-tense verb had instead of have. Bike is used here because it fits the examiner’s question and the surrounding context.

× Uh the my my my my my parent powering for me

✓ My parents bought it for me.

The original phrase does not form a complete grammatical sentence. Use a clear subject, a past-tense verb, and an object. The correction assumes the intended meaning is that the parents bought the bike.

× I very loved uh that pie.

✓ I loved that bike very much.

Very does not normally modify the verb loved directly. Use very much after the verb phrase to express the degree of your affection.

× But when when I grow up I don't need that pie because it's not suitable for me.

✓ But when I grew up, I didn't need that bike because it wasn't suitable for me.

The sentence describes a past change, so use grew up and didn't need. Use wasn't to keep the description of the bike in the same past-time context.

× Yet in my country yes I do in my country is very popular about held by everyone

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, and everyone uses them.

The original clause is incomplete because in my country needs a subject and a verb. Name the subject, bikes, and use are to form a complete sentence. The correction also removes the incomplete phrase about held by everyone.

× Every resident in my country always used theirby when when they uh want to go to the market or supermarket or someone nearly

✓ Every resident in my country always uses their bike when they want to go to a nearby market or supermarket.

Every resident is grammatically singular, so use uses rather than used when describing a general habit. Their is acceptable as a gender-neutral pronoun, but it needs the noun bike. Nearby should come before the place it describes.