Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你直接回答了问题，但时态和冠词有误：“when I was a child”谈过去，应使用过去时；“ride”后应加冠词“a”，而且“haven't a bike”不自然。建议用一句说明过去没有自行车，再补充一个具体原因。

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I couldn’t ride one. I was a little afraid of falling, so I never learned.

Sugerencia: 你尝试按城市差异来回答，思路是相关的，但开头重复且有明显停顿；“the city you load”表达不清，可能想说“the city you live in”。此外，“write by it”应为“ride a bike”，单复数和后半句也未完成。建议先明确表态，再比较城市，并用具体原因补充，控制在五句以内。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are popular in some parts of my country, but it depends on where people live. In smaller cities, cycling is convenient because the roads are less crowded and distances are shorter. In big cities, people may prefer public transport because traffic can be heavy.

× No, actually I can't ride bike, so I haven't a bike when I was child.

✓ No, actually, I can't ride a bike, so I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

可数名词 bike 和 child 在这里是单数，前面需要加不定冠词 a。注意，句中 “haven't” 也需要根据过去时间改为 “didn't have”；这是过去时错误。

× No, actually I can't ride bike, so I haven't a bike when I was child.

✓ No, actually, I can't ride a bike, so I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

“when I was a child” 表示过去的时间，因此不能用现在时 “haven't”。描述过去没有某物，应使用 “didn't have”。

× In some city you can write by it easily, but in other cities you would you will not find the

✓ In some cities, you can write by it easily, but in other cities you will not find the...

“some” 表示一些，后面应接可数名词复数，所以应将 “city” 改为 “cities”。

× In some city you can write by it easily, but in other cities you would you will not find the

✓ In some cities, you can write by it easily, but in other cities you will not find the...

“would” 和 “will” 在这里不应连续用来表达同一个谓语。表达对未来或一般情况的判断时，保留 “will” 即可。原句后半部分没有说完，因此用省略号表示未完成。