Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I have. I gained the bike from my parents when I was about 3 years old and it has like 2 big wheels and little two wheels beside.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
No, by riding bikes is not the most important transportation in China. The most popular transportation is subway because people think it's fast and convenient.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答过去的经历要用过去时,可以说“Yes, I did.”;“gained the bike”不自然,建议用“got a bike”或“my parents gave me a bike”。描述车轮时,可以说“training wheels”(辅助轮),而不是“little two wheels beside”。补充一个具体细节即可,让回答自然简洁。
Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a bike when I was about three. It had two small training wheels, which helped me learn how to ride.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 57.0Sugerencia: 先直接回答自行车在中国是否普及,并避免用“by riding bikes”这种不自然的表达。可以用“Cycling isn’t as popular as...”进行比较;“the subway”前需要加定冠词。再用一两个具体原因解释地铁更受欢迎,并用“because”连接,保持表达连贯。
Ejemplo: I’d say bikes aren’t as popular as they used to be in many Chinese cities. A lot of people prefer taking the subway because it’s fast and convenient, especially during rush hour. However, cycling is still popular for short trips in some areas.
× Yes, I have.
✓ Yes, I did.
问题问的是过去“小时候有没有自行车”,因此回答也应使用过去时。这里应使用与疑问句中的 did 对应的 did,而不是现在完成时助动词 have。
× I gained the bike from my parents when I was about 3 years old and it has like 2 big wheels and little two wheels beside.
✓ I gained the bike from my parents when I was about 3 years old, and it has like 2 big wheels and two little wheels beside it.
表示数量的 two 应放在形容词 little 前面,所以应说 two little wheels,而不是 little two wheels。
× I gained the bike from my parents when I was about 3 years old and it has like 2 big wheels and little two wheels beside.
✓ I gained the bike from my parents when I was about 3 years old, and it has like 2 big wheels and two little wheels beside it.
beside 是介词,后面通常需要接它所表示位置参照的对象。这里应在 beside 后补上 it,指代自行车。
× No, by riding bikes is not the most important transportation in China.
✓ No, riding bikes is not the most important transportation in China.
这里的 riding bikes 是句子的主语,不需要在它前面加 by。去掉 by 后,动名词短语可以直接作主语。
× The most popular transportation is subway because people think it's fast and convenient.
✓ The most popular transportation is the subway because people think it's fast and convenient.
表示地铁这种交通方式时,subway 前通常需要加定冠词 the,因此应说 the subway。