Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答先直接说明小时候有没有自行车，再用具体细节补充，例如是谁送的、骑了多久或常去哪里骑。注意使用自然表达：这里应说“rode it”，而不是“started it”；“for such a long time”可改为“for many years”；“I can ride this back”表达不清楚，可以删除。最后关于路标的内容不完整，建议删掉或补充完整。整体控制在2至3句，并避免重复。

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My father gave me a bike when I was about eight, and I rode it almost every day until I was a teenager. I often cycled around my neighborhood with my friends.

Sugerencia: 回答有明确观点，也提供了通勤和周末骑行的例子。注意可数名词的复数形式：泛指自行车时用“bikes”，相应地说“use bikes”和“ride bikes”。“during their weekends”不够自然，可改为“at weekends”或“on weekends”；“exercise their body”可改为“get some exercise”。建议删去过多的“uh”，并把信息整理成两句。

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China. Many people use them to commute, while others ride them to parks at weekends to get some exercise.

× I can ride this back and using this bike.

✓ I could ride this bike and use it.

这句话描述的是童年时的能力，应使用 can 的过去式 could。另外，情态动词后要接动词原形，因此应说 use，而不是 using。

× I can ride this back and using this bike.

✓ I could ride this bike and use it.

ride 和 use 是由 and 连接的并列动词，形式应保持一致。因为 could 后接动词原形，所以这里应使用 use，而不是 using。

× Yes, I think uh bike are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数 bikes；are 与复数主语搭配正确。

× Uh, now I live in China and people usually use bike to go to work and during their weekends, uh, they usually ride bike to go to the park and exercise their body.

✓ Uh, now I live in China and people usually use bikes to go to work. During their weekends, they usually ride bikes to go to the park and exercise their bodies.

这里泛指人们使用和骑的自行车，应使用复数 bikes。their 指多人各自的身体时，body 也应使用复数 bodies。