Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then explain that you borrowed your brother’s bike. Avoid repeating “unfortunately,” and use consistent past-tense verbs: “got” and “could.” Also say “my brother’s bike” rather than “my brothers,” and finish with a clear detail about how you used it.

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have my own bike as a child because my mother never bought me one. However, my older brother had a bike that our father had given him, so I could borrow it sometimes. I enjoyed riding it around our neighborhood.

Sugerencia: Make your main point clear first: bikes are more popular in cities than in rural areas. The opening phrase and the word “King” are unclear, so use simple, accurate wording. Explain the contrast with a specific reason, such as better access to shops in cities or poor road conditions in rural areas, and avoid repeating words.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in cities. They are convenient for short trips, and people can usually find bike shops or rental services there. In rural areas, they may be less common because bike shops are harder to reach and some roads are in poor condition.

× I could borrow my brothers because he get one from my father.

✓ I could borrow my brother's bike because he got one from my father.

The singular pronoun he refers to one brother, so use the singular possessive brother's, not the plural brothers. Name the bike to make clear what was borrowed. Check whether the noun and the pronoun referring to it are singular or plural.

× He get one from my father.

✓ He got one from my father.

The sentence describes something that happened when you were a child, so the verb should be in the past tense. Get has the irregular past-tense form got. Use got for a completed action in the past.

× So I can use that.

✓ So I could use it.

This describes what you were able to do as a child, so could is more appropriate than can. Use could to describe past ability. It is also clearer to use it to refer to the bike.

× The access of the street is not good enough.

✓ Access to the roads is not good enough.

The correct preposition after access is to, not of. Say access to something, such as access to roads or access to public transport.