Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I have. When I was six years old, my mom gave me the later bike, um, but I really I'm not really like it because I'm I'm feeling um dangerous because I can't keep the balance.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, it's very popular in my country. Um in my country near the street have lots of public bike people can use using the phone and scan the QR code and they can spend like less money and hire the bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 42.0Sugerencia: 先直接回答过去的经历,注意使用过去时:用“Yes, I did”而不是“Yes, I have”。表达不喜欢时可说“I didn’t really like it”;说明原因时用“I felt unsafe because I couldn’t keep my balance”。避免重复“I’m”和过多填充词,并确认“the later bike”想表达的具体意思。
Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My mum gave me a bike when I was six, but I didn’t really enjoy riding it because I felt unsafe and couldn’t keep my balance.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 52.0Sugerencia: 开头直接回答“Bikes are very popular in my country”,注意主谓一致:bikes 是复数,应使用“they are”。把街边的公共自行车、扫码方式和价格优势按顺序说明;可用“for example”和“because”连接细节。表达“租车”可用“rent a bike”,不要说“spend less money and hire the bike”。
Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. There are public bikes parked along many streets, and people can unlock one by scanning a QR code with their phones. They’re inexpensive and convenient, especially for short trips.
× Yes, I have.
✓ Yes, I did.
问题问的是过去(Did you have...?),回答时应使用过去时助动词 did,而不是现在时 have。回答过去时的一般疑问句时,可以用“Yes, I did.”
× I really I'm not really like it.
✓ I didn't really like it.
表达“不喜欢”时,实义动词 like 前不应使用 be 动词 I'm。结合前文的过去时间,应使用“didn't + 动词原形”,即“didn't like”。
× I'm feeling dangerous.
✓ I felt unsafe.
dangerous 通常表示“会造成危险的”,例如 dangerous driving;这里想表达自己感到不安全,应使用 unsafe。
× I'm feeling dangerous because I can't keep the balance.
✓ I felt unsafe because I couldn't keep my balance.
这段经历发生在童年,叙述时应使用过去时:feel 改为 felt,can't 改为 couldn't。
× I can't keep the balance.
✓ I couldn't keep my balance.
这里说的是自己无法保持平衡,应使用物主限定词 my,表达“我的平衡”;“keep my balance”是自然的表达。
× Yes, it's very popular in my country.
✓ Yes, they are very popular in my country.
问题中的 bikes 是复数,因此应使用复数代词 they,而不是单数代词 it;相应地,be 动词也应使用 are。
× In my country near the street have lots of public bike.
✓ There are lots of public bikes near the streets in my country.
句子要表达“有很多公共自行车”,应使用“There are + 复数名词”的结构。不能直接用 have 表示某处存在某物。
× lots of public bike
✓ lots of public bikes
lots of 后面表示许多可数名词时,名词应使用复数形式,所以 bike 要加 -s,变为 bikes。
× People can use using the phone and scan the QR code.
✓ People can use their phones to scan the QR code.
can 后应接动词原形 use;这里 use 后再接 using 结构不正确。表达“用手机扫描二维码”时,可以说“use their phones to scan the QR code”。