Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充一个具体回忆或感受。“enjoyed the ride bicycle”表达不自然，可改为“enjoyed riding my bike”；“sport enlightenment”不符合这里的语境，可说明自行车让你开始喜欢运动。注意使用自然的动词搭配，并避免重复使用“bicycle”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. I loved riding it around my neighborhood, and it was actually what first got me interested in sports.

Sugerencia: 开头直接说明自行车是否受欢迎；接着用清晰的原因和具体例子支持观点。“popular tool”可换成“a popular way to get around”；“on account of profils of people”语法和意思都不清楚，可改为“many people ride bikes”；“such as go to work”应改为“such as commuting to work”。

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re an affordable and convenient way to get around. For example, many people ride them to work or to nearby shops, especially when the weather is good.

× I enjoyed the ride bicycle because bicycle is my sport enlightenment.

✓ I enjoyed riding a bicycle because the bicycle is my sport enlightenment.

“Enjoy”后面表示喜欢做某事时，通常接动名词（动词-ing形式），所以应将“the ride bicycle”改为“riding a bicycle”。

× I enjoyed the ride bicycle because bicycle is my sport enlightenment.

✓ I enjoyed riding a bicycle because the bicycle is my sport enlightenment.

“Bicycle”是可数名词单数，前面需要限定词。这里第一次提到时用“a bicycle”，再次提到同一辆自行车时用“the bicycle”。

× Yeah, in my opinion it is a popular tool because on account of profils of people will ride bicycle to go outside, such as go to work.

✓ Yeah, in my opinion, it is a popular tool because people will ride bicycles to go outside, such as going to work.

“Because”和“on account of”都表示原因，不应在此处重复使用。保留“because”即可；原句中“on account of profils of”也无法自然地连接后面的句子。

× Yeah, in my opinion it is a popular tool because on account of profils of people will ride bicycle to go outside, such as go to work.

✓ Yeah, in my opinion, it is a popular tool because people will ride bicycles to go outside, such as going to work.

这里泛指人们骑自行车，应用可数名词复数“bicycles”，而不是单数“bicycle”。

× Yeah, in my opinion it is a popular tool because on account of profils of people will ride bicycle to go outside, such as go to work.

✓ Yeah, in my opinion, it is a popular tool because people will ride bicycles to go outside, such as going to work.

“Such as”后面举例时，可以接名词或动名词。此处应将“go”改为“going”，与“such as”的用法搭配。