Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 先直接回答是否有自行车，并注意讲过去的经历时使用过去时，例如用“had”而不是“have”。“take my back”表达不清楚，可以改为“ride my bike”；“take me to anywhere”可改为“take me anywhere”。补充一个具体用途即可，避免重复表达方便。

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to the park or to my friends’ houses, so it gave me a lot of freedom.

Sugerencia: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎，并注意主谓一致：这里应使用复数“bikes are”。删掉“uh”和重复的“s”，并将“take their bike to outside”改为“ride their bikes outside”。可以补充一个具体原因或场景，让回答更有内容。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. They often ride them to school or meet up with friends because cycling is convenient and inexpensive.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child 'cause I could take my back and take me to anywhere and it's very convenient for me.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because I could take it with me and go anywhere, and it was very convenient for me.

这句话描述的是童年经历，时间明确在过去，因此要用一般过去时：将 have 改为 had。后面的 it 指代童年时的自行车，也应与过去时间保持一致，将 it's 改为 it was。

× I could take my back and take me to anywhere.

✓ I could take my bike with me and go anywhere.

表示“去任何地方”时，anywhere 前通常不加介词 to，应直接说 go anywhere。原句中 take me to anywhere 的搭配不正确；可以改为 go anywhere。

× Most of uh s students also have a bike.

✓ Most students also have a bike.

most 后面直接接复数名词时，不需要加 of，因此应说 most students。如果保留 of，则需要说 most of the students。

× I think it's very popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country.

这里谈论的是复数的 bikes，不能用单数代词 it 指代。直接重复复数主语 bikes，并使用 are，表达更清楚、也与问题中的复数主语一致。

× They love to take their bike to outside with their friends.

✓ They love to take their bikes outside with their friends.

outside 表示“在外面／到外面”时可以直接作副词使用，前面不需要加 to。另外，学生们各自骑车时，用复数 bikes 更符合这里的语境。