Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答切题，也提供了自行车颜色和学车经历，内容基础结构不错。注意统一过去时：讲童年经历时用“had”和“helped”；“write it”应改为“ride it”，“in the middle size”不自然，可说“a medium-sized bike”。句子较长，建议拆分并用“and”或“so”连接细节。

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a red, medium-sized bike when I was a child. My sister helped me learn to ride it, and I picked it up in just half a day.

Sugerencia: 你直接表达了看法，也给出了原因，但“riding bikes need”主谓不一致，应改为“riding bikes takes”或“people need”；“a lot of. Energy”应连写为“a lot of energy”。“没时间”与骑车不流行之间的关系还不够具体，可以补充人们通常选择什么交通方式，以及骑车耗时或费力的原因。

Ejemplo: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer to drive or take public transport because they have busy schedules. Also, cycling can be tiring, especially over long distances.

× Yes, when I was a child I have a red bicycle in the middle size and my sister helps me, helped me learn to write it and it only took half a day.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a red bicycle in the middle size, and my sister helped me learn to write it. It only took half a day.

“When I was a child”表示过去的时间，因此描述当时拥有自行车要用过去式“had”，不能用“have”。“helps me”是现在时，也应改为过去式“helped me”。说过去发生的事情时，要保持动词时态一致。

× a red bicycle in the middle size

✓ a medium-sized red bicycle

“in the middle size”不是表达自行车尺寸的自然结构。可以用形容词“medium-sized”表示“中等尺寸的”，并放在名词“bicycle”前面。

× Riding bikes need a lot of energy.

✓ Riding bikes takes a lot of energy.

“Riding bikes”是动名词短语，在句中作主语，通常看作单数，因此谓语动词要用单数形式。“take”应改为“takes”。

× Energy.

✓ Riding bikes takes a lot of energy.

“Energy.”单独作为句子时没有谓语动词，不能构成完整句子。应将它与前面的内容合并，例如说“Riding bikes takes a lot of energy”。