Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and keep the timeline clear. Your response is difficult to follow because it shifts between owning a bike now and receiving one at age 16, and the model name and final phrase are unclear. Use complete sentences, explain briefly what kind of bike it was, and add one specific detail about how you used it.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a teenager. My dad bought me a scooter when I was 16, and I used it to get around my neighborhood. I was really excited because it was my first bike.

Sugerencia: Give a clear answer first, then explain why bikes are popular. Avoid the unclear contrast between their popularity and the difficulty of riding them; specify whether you mean bicycles or motorbikes. Use a linking word such as “because” or “although,” and support your point with a concrete example.

Ejemplo: Yes, motorbikes are very popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around. Although traffic can make riding stressful in cities, people enjoy using them for short trips. In quieter areas, cycling is also a pleasant way to enjoy the scenery.

× Yes, I do have a bike, it's an active 5G but when I was 16 years old my dad bought me a bike that is an Activa abide in the year 2021 so it is very.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. When I was 16, my dad bought me an Activa 5G in 2021.

The question asks about having a bike during childhood, so use the past-tense form had rather than do have. Use bought for the completed past event as well. When answering questions about a past period, keep the verbs describing that period in the past tense.

× Yes, I do have a bike, it's an active 5G but when I was 16 years old my dad bought me a bike that is an Activa abide in the year 2021 so it is very.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. When I was 16, my dad bought me an Activa 5G in 2021.

The original answer joins several clauses into one confusing sentence and ends with so it is very, which is an incomplete clause because very needs a word or phrase to complete its meaning. Divide related ideas into complete sentences, and do not leave a clause unfinished.

× Yes, in my country, mostly bikes are very popular, but it's hard to travel, hard to ride the bike. Uh can enjoy the views by riding your bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, but it can be difficult to travel by bike. You can enjoy the views by riding a bike.

The clause can enjoy the views is missing a subject. Add a subject such as you to make it a complete sentence. Also, use a complete clause after but so that the ideas are clearly connected.