Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I did. I had a ride and a small bike when I was six years old. and I thought I'm not good at riding bike because I always fell down.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, I do. I think motorbikes is the most popular form to transport in my country because it's very inexpensive to maintain and they allow people park very easily. Um I think
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 62.0Sugerencia: 你直接回答了问题,也补充了年龄和骑车经历。不过,“a ride”表达不清楚,建议说明你拥有什么类型的自行车;注意句首大写,并使用正确的过去时,例如“thought I wasn’t good at riding a bike”。可以补充一个具体细节,让回答更自然、连贯。
Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was six. I wasn’t very good at riding it at first because I often fell off. Still, I enjoyed practising.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 你给出了明确观点和原因,但回答在“Um I think”处中断,建议结束完整句子。注意主谓一致:“motorbikes are”;“交通工具”可说“form of transport”,而“让人们容易停车”可说“make it easy for people to park”。另外,可以具体说明这些优势如何帮助当地人。
Ejemplo: Yes, I do. Motorbikes are very popular in my country, especially in busy cities. They’re relatively inexpensive to maintain, and they make it easy for people to park in crowded areas. That’s why many people use them for their daily commute.
× Yes, I did. I had a ride and a small bike when I was six years old. and I thought I'm not good at riding bike because I always fell down.
✓ Yes, I did. I had a ride and a small bike when I was six years old, and I thought I wasn't good at riding a bike because I always fell down.
这里讲的是过去的想法,主句用了过去式“thought”,因此后面的内容通常也要与过去时态保持一致,应将“I'm not”改为“wasn't”。建议讲述过去经历时留意从句中的时态呼应。
× Yes, I did. I had a ride and a small bike when I was six years old. and I thought I'm not good at riding bike because I always fell down.
✓ Yes, I did. I had a ride and a small bike when I was six years old, and I thought I wasn't good at riding a bike because I always fell down.
“bike”是可数名词单数,泛指骑自行车时需要加冠词,因此应说“riding a bike”。建议使用可数名词单数时检查前面是否需要冠词“a”或“the”。
× Yes, I do. I think motorbikes is the most popular form to transport in my country because it's very inexpensive to maintain and they allow people park very easily.
✓ Yes, I do. I think motorbikes are the most popular form of transport in my country because they are very inexpensive to maintain and allow people to park easily.
主语“motorbikes”是复数,谓语动词应使用“are”,不能用“is”。建议先确定主语的单复数,再选择相应的be动词或谓语形式。
× Yes, I do. I think motorbikes is the most popular form to transport in my country because it's very inexpensive to maintain and they allow people park very easily.
✓ Yes, I do. I think motorbikes are the most popular form of transport in my country because they are very inexpensive to maintain and allow people to park easily.
表达“交通方式”时应使用“form of transport”,而不是“form to transport”。建议记住固定搭配“a form of + 名词”。
× Yes, I do. I think motorbikes is the most popular form to transport in my country because it's very inexpensive to maintain and they allow people park very easily.
✓ Yes, I do. I think motorbikes are the most popular form of transport in my country because they are very inexpensive to maintain and allow people to park easily.
前文的中心名词“motorbikes”是复数,后文用“they”指代它们;原句却使用单数形式“it's”,指代不一致。建议使用代词时确认其所指名词,并保持单复数一致。
× Yes, I do. I think motorbikes is the most popular form to transport in my country because it's very inexpensive to maintain and they allow people park very easily.
✓ Yes, I do. I think motorbikes are the most popular form of transport in my country because they are very inexpensive to maintain and allow people to park easily.
“allow”后接“宾语 + to do”结构,因此应说“allow people to park”,不能省略“to”。建议记住结构“allow someone to do something”。