Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then combine the details into fluent sentences. “A lovely bike” is a sentence fragment, and “had eight gears to it” sounds unnatural; say “had eight gears” instead. You could also avoid repeating “it was” by linking the details more smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mum gave me a red Firefox bike, which I thought was lovely. It had eight gears, so I could ride it comfortably on different kinds of roads.

Sugerencia: Give a clear yes-or-no opinion in your first sentence, then support it with one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid hesitations and restarting the sentence, and use “pedal bikes” rather than “paddle bikes.” The phrase “all along with that” is unnatural; use “also” or “in addition.” Make sure your examples clearly explain who uses bikes and why.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. Many people use them for short journeys because they are affordable and easy to park. In addition, cycling enthusiasts often ride mountain bikes for exercise or recreation.

× A lovely bike.

✓ It was a lovely bike.

This is a sentence fragment because it has no verb. Add a subject and a verb to make it a complete sentence.

× It was red in colour and had eight gears to it.

✓ It was red in colour and had eight gears.

The preposition to is unnecessary after had in this sentence. Say had eight gears.

× If you're talking about, uh, paddle bikes, they are more We can see pedal bikes on roads often used by people who cannot afford uh, motorbikes or big vehicles and all along with that cyclist also use pedal bikes such as mountain bike.

✓ If you're talking about pedal bikes, they are more popular. We can often see pedal bikes being used on the roads by people who cannot afford motorbikes or larger vehicles. In addition, cyclists also use pedal bikes such as mountain bikes.

The original contains an incomplete phrase, they are more, followed by a new clause without a clear connection. Organize the ideas into complete sentences and use a suitable linking phrase, such as in addition, to introduce the next point.

× ...cyclist also use pedal bikes such as mountain bike.

✓ ...cyclists also use pedal bikes such as mountain bikes.

The nouns refer to people and bikes in general, so use the plural forms cyclists and mountain bikes. Use plural nouns when making a general statement about members of a group or types of bikes.

× ...cyclist also use pedal bikes...

✓ ...cyclists also use pedal bikes...

The original singular subject cyclist does not agree with the plural verb use. Changing the subject to cyclists makes it agree with use. Alternatively, you could write a cyclist also uses.