Bike— Part 1 Informe

PrácticaPart12026-10-30 13:30:46

Conversación

Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Yes, I had back when I was a child. No, I didn't have a bike when I was child.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Well, I think banks are quite probably in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short tips and many people use them to avoid traffic. For example, offensive students are office works reading back to the nearby.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 5.0Fluidez y coherencia: 5.0Pronunciación: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso léxico: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Puntuación: 25.0

Sugerencia: 回答前先确定是“有”还是“没有”,避免前后矛盾。可直接回答问题,再补充一个具体细节。注意表达“小时候”可说“when I was a child”或“as a child”;如果表示拥有某物,需说“I had a bike”。

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually walked to school with my parents instead.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Puntuación: 30.0

Sugerencia: 先直接表明自行车是否受欢迎,并使用与题目相关的词“bikes”,不要误说成“banks”。理由可以具体说明自行车价格便宜、适合短途出行或能避开交通拥堵。第二句目前表达不清,建议用清楚的例子,例如学生或上班族骑车去附近的学校或工作地点;注意“短途旅行”是“short trips”,“上班族”是“office workers”。

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re affordable and convenient for short trips. Many people ride them to work or school to avoid traffic, especially in busy cities.

Gramática

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I had back when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child.

“had”在这里需要一个宾语。结合问题中的“bike”,可以用“one”代替“a bike”,避免重复。

22: Article errors

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

“child”是可数名词单数,前面需要冠词。这里应使用“a child”。

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Well, I think banks are quite probably in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short tips and many people use them to avoid traffic.

✓ Well, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips, and many people use them to avoid traffic.

这里需要表达“自行车很受欢迎”,系动词“are”后应使用形容词“popular”,而不是副词“probably”。“banks”应为“bikes”,“tips”应为“trips”;这两处属于词语错误,并非本题所列的语法类型。

26: Sentence structure errors

× For example, offensive students are office works reading back to the nearby.

✓ For example, office workers ride bikes to nearby places.

原句结构不完整且难以理解。“are office works reading back to the nearby”不能清楚表达句意。结合上下文,可改为完整的主谓宾结构“office workers ride bikes to nearby places”(上班族骑自行车去附近的地方)。

Vocabulario

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Cheap— Inexpensive; Poor-quality; Miserly; Despicable; Ashamed
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Short— Concise; Brief; Scarce; Briefly
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