Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then explain your parents’ concerns in one clear sentence. Use the past tense because the question is about childhood: say “I didn’t have a bike” rather than “I don’t have any bike.” Replace the unclear phrase “were the adult about my safety” with a natural expression such as “were worried about my safety.” Avoid making a broad claim about traffic rules; explain specifically that traffic felt unsafe.

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents were worried about my safety because the traffic in our area was quite chaotic, so they didn’t think it was safe for me to ride one.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion at the start and avoid repeating “I believe” and “I guess.” The phrase “special event for the bike research” is unclear, and “moreover” does not fit at the end of this sentence. Use the plural “kinds” and organize your examples with a linking phrase such as “for example.” Explain briefly why bikes are popular, and distinguish between bicycles and motorbikes if that is what you mean.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in busy cities. For example, many people use motorbikes and scooters because they are convenient in heavy traffic, while electric bikes are becoming more common as well.

× Uh, honestly speaking, no, I don't have any bike when I am child because my parents were the adult about my safety and as well as the Indian traffic system and there is no rule and regulation.

✓ Honestly, no. I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents were concerned about my safety and the Indian traffic system, where there were no rules or regulations.

The question asks about your childhood, so use the past tense: didn't have and was. Keep the verbs in the past when describing the situation at that time, including were no rules or regulations.

× Uh, honestly speaking, no, I don't have any bike when I am child because my parents were the adult about my safety and as well as the Indian traffic system and there is no rule and regulation.

✓ Honestly, no. I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents were concerned about my safety and the Indian traffic system, where there were no rules or regulations.

Use the article a before the singular countable noun bike and before child in the phrase a child. Singular countable nouns generally need an article or another determiner.

× Uh, honestly speaking, no, I don't have any bike when I am child because my parents were the adult about my safety and as well as the Indian traffic system and there is no rule and regulation.

✓ Honestly, no. I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents were concerned about my safety and the Indian traffic system, where there were no rules or regulations.

Parents refers to more than one person, so adult must be plural if you use that noun. Also, the coordinated nouns rule and regulation should both be plural in this context: rules and regulations.

× Uh, honestly speaking, no, I don't have any bike when I am child because my parents were the adult about my safety and as well as the Indian traffic system and there is no rule and regulation.

✓ Honestly, no. I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents were concerned about my safety and the Indian traffic system, where there were no rules or regulations.

The phrase rules or regulations refers to plural nouns, so use the plural verb were rather than is. Match the verb to the number of the subject.

× Uh, I believe, I guess Bika is very popular in my country, even the uh special event for the bike research, as well as there are several kind of bikes such as motorbikes, electric bikes, scooty, moreover.

✓ I believe bikes are very popular in my country. There are even special events related to bikes, and there are several kinds of bikes, such as motorbikes, electric bikes, and scooters.

The original answer does not form a complete, well-connected sentence: even the special event is a fragment, and the ideas are joined awkwardly. State the main idea in a complete sentence, then use a separate sentence or a clear conjunction to add examples.

× Uh, I believe, I guess Bika is very popular in my country, even the uh special event for the bike research, as well as there are several kind of bikes such as motorbikes, electric bikes, scooty, moreover.

✓ I believe bikes are very popular in my country. There are even special events related to bikes, and there are several kinds of bikes, such as motorbikes, electric bikes, and scooters.

Several must be followed by a plural countable noun, so use kinds, not kind. The examples also refer to more than one type, so use plural forms such as scooters.

× Uh, I believe, I guess Bika is very popular in my country, even the uh special event for the bike research, as well as there are several kind of bikes such as motorbikes, electric bikes, scooty, moreover.

✓ I believe bikes are very popular in my country. There are even special events related to bikes, and there are several kinds of bikes, such as motorbikes, electric bikes, and scooters.

As well as does not work naturally in the phrase as well as there are. Use and to connect the two complete ideas, or place as well as before a noun phrase, such as special events as well as several kinds of bikes.