Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 先直接回答“没有”，并统一使用过去时：说过去没有自行车用“didn’t have”，描述小时候的家庭情况用“was”。避免重复或犹豫表达（如“my my, my”）。可以补充一个具体原因；“We now have enough money”与问题关联较弱，建议说明家里当时买不起，或现在的情况有什么变化。

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family didn’t have much money at the time, so we couldn’t afford one. I learned to ride a bike when I was older.

Sugerencia: 先明确表达观点，并使用正确词汇“bikes”，不要误说成“bags”。句子中“we are popular used car and mob”语法不通；可以改为“people prefer to use cars and motorbikes”。用一条清晰的理由或对比来支持观点，并删去重复的“in my country”和填充词。

Ejemplo: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer cars or motorbikes because they’re more convenient for travelling longer distances. However, bikes are still common in parks and on university campuses.

× Actually I'm not have a bike when I were a child.

✓ Actually, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时发生的情况，应使用过去时。否定过去时要用“didn't + 动词原形”，所以应说“didn't have”；主语是“I”时，be动词的过去式应为“was”，而不是“were”。

× When I am a child of my my, my family is very poor.

✓ When I was a child, my family was very poor.

这里描述的是过去的童年生活，因此应将“am”和“is”改为过去式“was”。“of my my”是重复且不完整的表达，应删去；说“当我还是个孩子时”用“When I was a child”。

× Uh, we, we are popular used car and mob.

✓ We commonly use cars and motorbikes.

“we are popular used car and mob”缺少正确的谓语结构。“popular”不能这样放在“are”和“used”之间表达“经常使用”。可以用主语“we”加动词“use”，并用“commonly”修饰动词；泛指多辆汽车时用复数“cars”。