Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答切题，也提到了骑车上学和周末活动等具体经历。注意描述童年时要保持过去时，例如将“go”改为“went”；“go to park”前应加“the”或“a”，“bicycle”前应加“a”。最后一句表达不够自然，可以说骑车让你有机会认识附近的人。建议用连接词组织细节，并避免重复提到骑车。

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school, and at weekends I would ride to the park for fun. It also gave me a chance to meet people who lived nearby.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了自行车现在更受欢迎的观点，但开头没有直接清楚地回答问题，而且句子中的语法错误较多。注意“骑自行车”应说“riding bikes”，“保持健康”应说“staying healthy”；描述现在的趋势时，主谓要一致，例如“it has become”。建议先直接回答，再用一个具体原因解释，并删去重复表达。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. More people are choosing to cycle because they want to stay healthy and avoid traffic. Cycling is also a convenient way to get around in many cities.

× I usually go to school by bike and I come back home and go to park and have fun at the weekend by bike.

✓ I usually went to school by bike, came back home, went to the park, and had fun on weekends by bike.

这句话描述的是“小时候”的经历，应该使用过去时。将 go、come、have 分别改为 went、came、had。建议先判断事情发生的时间，再统一句中的动词时态。

× I usually go to school by bike and I come back home and go to park and have fun at the weekend by bike.

✓ I usually went to school by bike, came back home, went to the park, and had fun on weekends by bike.

park 是可数名词，这里指去公园，需要在 park 前加冠词。这里使用 the，表达去某个具体或双方都知道的公园。

× I think bicycle can give me a chance to communicate with people who live nearby me.

✓ I think a bicycle can give me a chance to communicate with people who live near me.

bicycle 是单数可数名词，不能单独使用，需要加冠词 a。建议检查单数可数名词前是否有冠词或其他限定词。

× I think bicycle can give me a chance to communicate with people who live nearby me.

✓ I think a bicycle can give me a chance to communicate with people who live near me.

nearby 通常作副词或形容词，不直接这样修饰 me。表示“住在我附近”时，用 near me。

× Actually when I was a child rising bike isn't very popular but now when people realize that keeping keep health is more and more important and so it become more and more popular to using bike.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, riding a bike wasn't very popular. But now, as people realize that staying healthy is increasingly important, it has become increasingly popular to use bikes.

when I was a child 指过去的时间，因此不能用现在时 isn't，应改为 wasn't。建议遇到明确的过去时间状语时，使用相应的过去时。

× Actually when I was a child rising bike isn't very popular but now when people realize that keeping keep health is more and more important and so it become more and more popular to using bike.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, riding a bike wasn't very popular. But now, as people realize that staying healthy is increasingly important, it has become increasingly popular to use bikes.

health 是名词，不能直接放在表示“保持……”的结构中修饰人。这里要表达“保持健康”，应使用形容词 healthy。可以记住 stay/keep 后常接形容词来描述状态。

× Actually when I was a child rising bike isn't very popular but now when people realize that keeping keep health is more and more important and so it become more and more popular to using bike.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, riding a bike wasn't very popular. But now, as people realize that staying healthy is increasingly important, it has become increasingly popular to use bikes.

it 是第三人称单数，使用一般现在时时，动词需要加 -s。不过此处结合 now 所表达的变化，用现在完成时 has become 更自然。注意主语为第三人称单数时，检查动词形式是否匹配。

× Actually when I was a child rising bike isn't very popular but now when people realize that keeping keep health is more and more important and so it become more and more popular to using bike.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, riding a bike wasn't very popular. But now, as people realize that staying healthy is increasingly important, it has become increasingly popular to use bikes.

这里的 to 是不定式标记，后面应接动词原形 use，而不是 -ing 形式 using。建议区分不定式 to do 和介词 to 后接 -ing 的用法。

× Actually when I was a child rising bike isn't very popular but now when people realize that keeping keep health is more and more important and so it become more and more popular to using bike.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, riding a bike wasn't very popular. But now, as people realize that staying healthy is increasingly important, it has become increasingly popular to use bikes.

这里泛指骑自行车这项活动时，可以说 riding a bike；泛指可供使用的自行车时，可以说 use bikes。bike 是可数名词，使用单数时需要冠词，泛指复数时则用 bikes。