Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clarify whether your parents did not allow you to have a bike or simply did not buy one. Use the natural phrase “asked my parents many times,” and complete the final thought with “they didn’t buy me one.” You can add a specific detail about how you felt or what you did instead.

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. I asked my parents many times to buy me one, but they never did. I was a little disappointed because I wanted to ride around with my friends.

Sugerencia: Give a clear answer first, such as “Yes, I think bikes are quite popular.” Use “people riding bikes” rather than “bikes who ride,” and replace “running pass” with “running path” if that is what you mean. Avoid repeating the same observation; instead, explain where you see cyclists and why people use bikes.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people riding them near my apartment, especially along a path close to my home. Many people seem to use bikes for exercise or short trips.

× I asked my parents a lot of time to buy me a bike.

✓ I asked my parents many times to buy me a bike.

Time refers to duration here, but you mean that you made the request on several occasions. Use the plural countable expression many times. When referring to repeated events, use times rather than time.

× They didn't buy me.

✓ They didn't buy one for me.

The sentence is incomplete in this context because buy needs an object to say what your parents did not buy. Use one to refer back to a bike, or say They didn't buy me a bike.

× Every day when I go out I see a lot of bikes who ride near my apartments.

✓ Every day when I go out, I see a lot of bikes that people ride near my apartment.

Who is used to refer to people, not bikes. Use that or which for things. The revised clause also makes clear that people, rather than the bikes themselves, are riding them.

× Additionally I have a running pass near my to my house and there are a lot of bikes.

✓ Additionally, I have a running pass near my house, and there are a lot of bikes.

The phrase near my to my house uses an unnecessary extra preposition. Use near my house. Check that you include only one preposition before the place you are describing.