Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I have.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
The bike is so popular in our country. I always use bike to go for school.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: 回答直接,但时态不正确:问题询问过去的经历,应使用过去时 “Yes, I did.”。答案也太简短,可以补充一两句具体信息,例如自行车的颜色、用途,或你是否喜欢骑它。
Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight. I used to ride it around my neighbourhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 你表达了自行车很受欢迎,也举了自己的例子,但有几处表达需要修改:“bikes”比“The bike”更适合泛指自行车;“use bike”应为“use a bike”或“ride a bike”;“go for school”应为“go to school”。另外,题目问的是一般情况,第一句可用一般现在时,再补充一个具体原因或场景,让回答更充分。
Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. Many students ride them to school because they are affordable and convenient. I sometimes ride a bike to school as well.
× Yes, I have.
✓ Yes, I did.
问题问的是“Did you have...?”,使用一般过去时。回答时应使用助动词 did 呼应过去时,不能用现在完成时助动词 have。
× I always use bike to go for school.
✓ I always use a bike to go for school.
bike 是可数名词单数,前面需要冠词。这里泛指一辆自行车,应使用 a。建议注意:可数名词单数通常不能单独使用。
× I always use bike to go for school.
✓ I always use bike to go to school.
表示去学校上学时,固定说法是 go to school,而不是 go for school。建议记住表示目的地时通常使用 to。