Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答直接且有具体经历，但句子之间缺少标点，形成了连写句。建议在不同信息之间使用句号或连接词；另外，讲述童年经历时把“like”改为过去式“liked”，并可补充一个具体细节，例如骑车的路线或感受。

Ejemplo: Yes, my dad bought me a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to school every day, which made the journey more enjoyable. I especially liked cycling along the quiet streets near my home.

Sugerencia: 回答结构清楚，也提供了骑行用途和例子。建议将不自然的“bike sharing supplies”改为“bike-sharing services”或“shared bikes”，并删除口语填充语“you know”。还可以把例子说得更具体，例如说明共享单车如何方便短途出行。

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially in large cities. People use them for exercise, short commutes, and weekend outings. For example, my city has plenty of shared bikes, so people can easily cycle to a nearby park or shop without driving.

× When I was a child my dad bought me a bike I used to ride into school every day and I really like it because it made getting around fun and easy.

✓ When I was a child, my dad bought me a bike. I used to ride into school every day, and I really liked it because it made getting around fun and easy.

这段话描述的是童年时的经历，主要时态是过去时。句中的“bought”和“made”都用了过去时，因此“like”也应改为“liked”，以保持时态一致。

× When I was a child my dad bought me a bike I used to ride into school every day and I really like it because it made getting around fun and easy.

✓ When I was a child, my dad bought me a bike. I used to ride into school every day, and I really liked it because it made getting around fun and easy.

原句中“my dad bought me a bike”和“I used to ride into school...”是两个完整句子，却没有用句号或恰当的连接词分开，形成了句子粘连。建议在完整句子之间使用句号，或使用连词连接，并在句首时间状语后加逗号。