Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Сначала ответьте прямо на вопрос, затем добавьте одну-две конкретные детали. Используйте прошедшее время: «had», «bought» и «rode». Вместо неестественного «buy me it» скажите «bought it for me», а фразу о прогулках постройте как «rode around the park with my family». Разделите идеи на отдельные предложения, чтобы избежать длинной грамматически неполной фразы.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was six, and I often rode it around the park with my family at weekends.

Sugerencia: Дайте ясный ответ: «Yes, bikes are popular in my country». Выражение «popular main country» не передаёт понятную мысль, поэтому опишите, кто и почему пользуется велосипедами. Используйте прошедшее время для воспоминаний («had», «rode») и уберите повтор «by bicycle/by bike». Добавьте одну конкретную деталь, например, что вы катались с друзьями после школы.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. When I was young, most of my friends had bikes, and we often rode around our neighbourhood together after school.

× Yes of course I have a bike when I was a child, my parents buy me it when I was 6 and every weekend with my family right throughout the park.

✓ Yes, of course. I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was six, and my family and I rode it through the park every weekend.

The answer refers to a completed period in the past, so use the past-tense verbs had, bought, and rode rather than have, buy, and ride. Keep the tense consistent throughout the answer when describing childhood experiences.

× my parents buy me it

✓ My parents bought it for me

When both object pronouns are used, the natural order here is the thing first, followed by for and the person: bought it for me. Avoid the sequence me it.

× and every weekend with my family right throughout the park.

✓ and my family and I rode it through the park every weekend.

This part is a fragment because it does not contain a subject and a finite verb. Add a subject and verb to make a complete clause, such as my family and I rode.

× Of course bike.

✓ Of course, bikes are popular.

Bike is a singular countable noun and cannot normally be used without an article. You can use a bike, or use the plural bikes when speaking about bikes in general.

× It's a popular main country, especially for children

✓ Bikes are popular in my country, especially among children.

Use in before my country to indicate where bikes are popular. Among is more suitable than for when describing the group of people among whom something is popular.

× every my friends

✓ all my friends

Every cannot directly precede a possessive determiner such as my. Use all my friends, or say every one of my friends.

× when I was young every my friends have a bike and we hang out together and ride by bicycle by by by bike.

✓ When I was young, all my friends had bikes, and we hung out together and rode bikes.

The answer describes a completed period in the past, so use had, hung out, and rode instead of have, hang out, and ride. Keep the verbs in the same tense when describing events from that period.