Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then explain the reason briefly. Use “ride a bike,” not “write a bike,” and avoid repeating fillers or ideas. Make the cause-and-effect relationship clear with a linking phrase such as “As a result.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike as a child, but I never learned how to ride it properly. I wasn’t very interested in learning at the time, so I still can’t ride a bike today.

Sugerencia: Give a clear answer and support it with a specific observation. Correct “a young people” to “young people,” and clarify which groups use bikes; the current ending is awkward and unclear. Avoid excessive fillers and use a connector to introduce your comparison.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, although they’re not as common as in Denmark. Young people often use them for short trips, while children and older adults mainly ride them for recreation or exercise.

× Usually a young people use bikes in their daily life.

✓ Usually, young people use bikes in their daily lives.

People is plural, so it cannot be preceded by the singular article a. Use young people. Since the sentence refers to the daily routines of multiple people, their daily lives is also more natural.

× Usually a young people use bikes in their daily life and just children and older people.

✓ Usually, young people use bikes in their daily lives, as do children and older people.

The final phrase, and just children and older people, has no verb and does not form a complete clause. Add a verb or use a structure such as as do children and older people to show that those groups also use bikes.