Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 質問に対して、まず「自転車を持っていたか」を明確に答えましょう。「Yes, I did」または「No, I didn’t」の形が使えます。「I heard but」は意味が伝わりにくく、「when I was a children child」は文法的に不自然です。「when I was a child」と言い、乗れたかどうかを理由や簡単な説明で補足しましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I did, but I couldn’t ride it very well when I was a child. I mostly used it to play around my neighbourhood.

Sugerencia: 最初に「自分の国で人気があると思うか」をはっきり答え、その後に具体的な観察や例を加えましょう。「compare with other country」は「compared with other countries」、「I really see that others ride」は「I often see other people riding」とすると自然です。自分がよく乗ることだけでなく、誰が・どこで乗っているかを説明すると、内容に説得力が出ます。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. I often see people riding them to work or school, although I’m not sure how popular they are compared with other countries.

× Yes, I heard but.

✓ Yes, I had one, but...

The question asks whether you had a bike in the past, so use had rather than heard. Had means possessed; heard means perceived a sound. Include one to make clear that you had a bike.

× I couldn't ride the bike way when I was a children child.

✓ I couldn't ride the bike very well when I was a child.

Way does not work as an adverb in this sentence. Use very well to describe how well you could ride the bike.

× I couldn't ride the bike way when I was a children child.

✓ I couldn't ride the bike very well when I was a child.

Child is singular, so use a child, not a children child. Children is the plural form and cannot follow a in this construction.

× MMM yes, but compare with other country.

✓ Yes, but compared with other countries, ...

Other refers to multiple countries in this comparison, so use the plural form countries. Compared with is also the appropriate form to introduce the comparison.