Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 質問には答えられていますが、「I have I had」と言い直しており、文の流れが不自然です。「I had a bike」を使って簡潔に答えましょう。また、「when I was a junior high school student」は「when I was in junior high school」とすると自然です。自転車をどのように使っていたかなど、具体的な情報を一つ加えると、回答がより充実します。

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I bought a bike when I was in junior high school, and I used it to ride around my neighborhood.

Sugerencia: 自転車が人気だという意見と理由を述べている点はよいですが、「lie」は「ride」の誤りと思われます。また、「go to the school」ではなく、一般的な通学を表す場合は「go to school」と言います。「commute」と「go to school」の内容を整理し、どのような人が何のために自転車を使うのかを具体的に説明しましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to commute to work or go to school, especially in towns where the distances are relatively short.

× Yeah, I have I had a bike and when I was a junior high school student, I bought it.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike when I was a junior high school student, and I bought it then.

The answer is about a past period, so use the past-tense form had rather than the present-tense form have. The phrase I have I had is also a false start; state the past-tense verb once. Using then clarifies that the purchase happened during that period.

× I think bikes are popular in my country because many people often lie to commute and go to the school.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because many people often lie to commute and go to school.

When school refers to the general activity or purpose of attending school, it is normally used without the. Therefore, say go to school, not go to the school. The word lie appears to be a word-choice error rather than an error covered by the specified grammar categories, so it has not been changed.